Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够直接，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议回答时先直接说明身份，然后简洁说明原因，避免冗长和语法错误。

Ejemplo: I am currently a student at a university in Taizhou. I chose this school because it is close to my home and offers good opportunities to learn about computer science.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且含糊，语法错误较多，缺乏连贯性。建议直接回答地点，并补充具体信息，使用连词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I study in Taizhou, a small city in eastern China. It is close to my home, which makes it convenient for me to commute.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确，句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和连接词。

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a great place to study because the school has a large library. It opens early in the morning and closes at 10 pm, providing a quiet environment for students.

Sugerencia: 表达重复且不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议简洁表达观点，使用连词连接原因和结果，避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like the school canteen to be bigger because it is often crowded after classes, making it hard to find a seat.

Sugerencia: 回答较完整，表达清晰，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。建议使用更地道的表达和连接词。

Ejemplo: I plan to continue my studies abroad because I am very interested in computer science and technology. Studying overseas will allow me to learn from experienced professors and gain practical skills.

× How about graduated with a job I started in a university in Taizhou and I chose this school because it has only a short distance from my home and this school offers opportunities for me to learn more about computer.

✓ I graduated and started a job. I studied at a university in Taizhou. I chose this school because it is only a short distance from my home and it offers opportunities for me to learn more about computers.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯的句子连接，导致表达不清晰。建议将句子拆分成几个简单句，明确表达毕业、工作和选择学校的原因。

× this school offers opportunities for me to learn more about computer.

✓ this school offers opportunities for me to learn more about computers.

“computer”应使用复数形式“computers”，因为这里指的是计算机领域的知识，而非单一的计算机。

× And I started in Teizu, a small sized city in the eastern part of China. It has only a short distance from my home and is more but having.

✓ I started in Taizhou, a small city in the eastern part of China. It is only a short distance from my home.

句子结构不完整且含糊，“is more but having”无意义，应删除。将句子简化为完整且通顺的表达。

× because the school provide a large library and it opened early in the morning and closed at 10 in the evening and it also provide a peaceful place for to study.

✓ because the school provides a large library. It opens early in the morning and closes at 10 in the evening. It also provides a peaceful place to study.

主语是单数“school”，谓语动词应加-s变为第三人称单数形式，如“provides”、“opens”、“closes”。

× it also provide a peaceful place for to study.

✓ it also provides a peaceful place to study.

“for to study”是不正确的搭配，应使用不定式“to study”表示目的。

× Yes, I hope that the canteen of school can be enlarged, because every time after the class we need to run fast to the canteen because it it was so small and when you have a crowd of people.

✓ Yes, I hope that the school canteen can be enlarged because every time after class we need to rush to the canteen since it is very small and crowded.

句子冗长且重复，“it it was so small”错误且重复，应简化并调整表达，使句子通顺且逻辑清晰。

× I would like to go further study maybe another country because I'm very interested in my major computer science and technology and I want to learn more about this major.

✓ I would like to pursue further studies in another country because I'm very interested in my major, computer science and technology, and I want to learn more about it.

“go further study”表达不正确，应使用“pursue further studies”。另外，句子中缺少介词“in”表示地点。

× Study abroad will give me the opportunity to learn from experienced professors and some practical skills.

✓ Studying abroad will give me the opportunity to learn from experienced professors and acquire some practical skills.

句子缺少动词“acquire”来连接“practical skills”，使表达完整。