Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e onek 'uh' use korchen, ja natural English e kom use kora uchit. Apnar answer e sentence structure aro clear korte hobe, ebong redundancy komate hobe. Apni direct bole dite paren je apni student o part-time kaj koren, tarpor kichu supporting details dite paren. Linking words use korle answer ta aro fluent hobe.

Ejemplo: I am both a student and a part-time worker. Currently, I am pursuing my bachelor's degree in history at MMM College, and at the same time, I work as a part-time instructor at a school. Additionally, I am preparing for the IELTS exam to improve my English skills.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu unnecessary filler words ache, ja avoid kora uchit. Apni sentence gulo ke aro concise ebong clear korte paren. Linking words use kore apnar point gulo logically present korte paren. Specific details dite paren jemon college er kon kon features famous.

Ejemplo: I study at Joshua MMM College, which is well-known for its beautiful natural surroundings and excellent education system. Many students from Joshua prefer this college because of its reputation and facilities.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistakes ache, ebong sentence structure clear na. Apni 'family familiar' er bodole 'like family' use korte paren. Supporting details dite paren jemon teachers friendly, help kore, etc. Linking words use korle answer ta aro fluent hobe.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is definitely a good place to study. The teachers and staff are very friendly and treat students like family. If I face any problems, I can easily ask for help, and they always support me.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e onek filler words ache, ebong kichu word use vul ache (e.g., 'applicate' er bodole 'apply'). Apni sentence gulo ke aro clear, concise, ebong grammatically correct korte hobe. Specific details dite paren keno canteen dorkar, ebong linking words use korte paren.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see some changes. Currently, our college does not have a canteen, so students often feel hungry during breaks. If possible, I plan to apply to the principal to request the construction of a canteen for students' convenience.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e filler words onek ache, ebong sentence structure aro clear korte hobe. Apni direct bole dite paren apnar future plan ki, tarpor supporting details dite paren. Linking words use korle answer ta aro fluent hobe.

Ejemplo: I have many dreams, but my main future plan is to study abroad. I want to pursue further education in a foreign country to gain more knowledge and experience.

× Uh, actually I am doing both.

✓ Uh, actually I am doing both.

No correction needed here as 'am doing' correctly indicates present continuous tense for ongoing actions.

× I am doing my uh, study, I am pursuing my bachelors from MMM college, majoring in history, as well as I'm taking preparation for IELTS, UH, and UH, I worked as a part time job, an instructor in a school.

✓ I am studying, I am pursuing my bachelor's degree from MMM College, majoring in history, as well as preparing for IELTS. Also, I worked part-time as an instructor in a school.

'Doing my study' is incorrect; 'studying' is the correct verb form. 'Bachelors' should be 'bachelor's degree' to show possession. 'Taking preparation' is incorrect; 'preparing for' is correct. 'I worked as a part time job' is incorrect; it should be 'I worked part-time as' to correctly express the job role.

× I am studying in Joshua MMM College, which is the greatest College of Joshua and uh is it is very famous for its natural beauty as well its education system.

✓ I am studying at Joshua MMM College, which is the greatest college in Joshua and is very famous for its natural beauty as well as its education system.

Use 'at' for institutions. 'Greatest College of Joshua' should be 'greatest college in Joshua'. 'As well its education system' should be 'as well as its education system' for correct conjunction.

× So most of the people of Joshua are studying here in MMM College.

✓ So most of the people of Joshua study here at MMM College.

'Are studying' suggests ongoing action but 'most of the people' implies a general fact, so simple present 'study' is better. Also, 'in MMM College' should be 'at MMM College'.

× Yeah, definitely. It's a very good place to to study and there's teachers and others.

✓ Yeah, definitely. It's a very good place to study and there are teachers and others.

'There's' is contraction of 'there is' which is singular; 'teachers and others' is plural, so 'there are' is correct.

× People are very family, family familiar and they are, they are so friendly with some student and if I have any problem then I can definitely ask him and they solve me.

✓ People are very familiar and friendly with students, and if I have any problem, I can definitely ask them and they help me.

'Family familiar' is incorrect; 'familiar' alone is correct. 'Some student' should be 'students' plural. 'They solve me' is incorrect; 'they help me' is correct.

× Yeah, definitely. I want to make sure change because in our college campus we have no, no canteen.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I want to make some changes because our college campus has no canteen.

'Want to make sure change' is incorrect; 'want to make some changes' is correct. 'We have no, no canteen' is redundant; 'has no canteen' is correct for singular campus.

× So students are support from Hungaress.

✓ So students rely on hunger strikes.

Original sentence is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly meant 'students suffer from hunger' or 'students rely on hunger strikes'. Needs clarification. Assuming 'support from Hungaress' is incorrect.

× So if uh, if possible, I will definitely, uh, applicate uh, application for my principal Sir, so that they can uh, definitely make a canteen for the students.

✓ So if possible, I will definitely apply to my principal so that they can make a canteen for the students.

'Applicate' is not a correct verb; 'apply' is correct. 'Application for my principal' should be 'apply to my principal'. Modal verb 'can' is used correctly here.

× There are a lot of, uh, dreams in my life, but my future goal is I want to go in abroad and uh, I want to do my further study in abroad, so this is my last plan.

✓ There are a lot of dreams in my life, but my future goal is to go abroad and do my further studies abroad; this is my final plan.

'Go in abroad' is incorrect; 'go abroad' is correct. 'Further study in abroad' should be 'further studies abroad'. 'Last plan' is better expressed as 'final plan'.