Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，如"I am a college student and I will graduate next year."，避免多余的词汇。

Ejemplo: I am a college student and I will graduate next year.

Sugerencia: 回答简洁明了，但介词使用不够准确，应该说"at the University of Science and Technology"。建议注意介词搭配，使表达更地道。

Ejemplo: I currently study at the University of Science and Technology.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，使用连词连接句子，并注意时态和词汇的准确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a great place to study because the school has excellent resources and a supportive learning environment that helps me gain a lot of knowledge.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复填充词，建议减少口头语，使用更准确的语法，如"I would like the school to enlarge the library because it is too small and many students don't have enough space to study."

Ejemplo: I would like the school to enlarge the library because it is too small and many students don't have enough space to study.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议明确表达短期和长期计划，避免口头语，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

Ejemplo: In the short term, I plan to pass my exams so that I can find a job in the language field. In the long term, I hope to become an excellent language teacher after I graduate.

× For me, I am a college student that will graduate next years.

✓ For me, I am a college student who will graduate next year.

“next years” 应该用单数形式“next year”，因为这里指的是下一年，而不是多年的时间。

× I currently study in the University of Science and Technology.

✓ I currently study at the University of Science and Technology.

表示在某个学校学习，通常用介词“at”而不是“in”。

× The school had really uh resources in study and I can learn in umm deep in learning environment which in allow me to gain lots of knowledge.

✓ The school has really good resources for study and I can learn in a deep learning environment which allows me to gain lots of knowledge.

这里描述的是现在的情况，应该用现在时“has”而不是过去时“had”；另外，“resources in study”应改为“resources for study”，介词使用错误；“which in allow”应改为“which allows”，主谓一致。

× the school libraries currently is too small and, uh, many people don't have space to learn.

✓ the school library currently is too small and, uh, many people don't have space to learn.

前文提到的是“the school library”，应保持单数形式；“libraries”复数与后文“is”单数动词不一致。

× the school libraries currently is too small and, uh, many people don't have space to learn.

✓ the school library currently is too small and, uh, many people don't have space to learn.

主语是单数“library”，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”，这里动词形式正确，但前文复数错误需改为单数。

× For the short term plan, I would like to pass the hours exams uh, so that I can find a job in language field, uh.

✓ For the short term plan, I would like to pass the hours exams, so that I can find a job in the language field.

“language field”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指；“hours exams”可能是“hours exams”的误写，若是“hours exams”应改为“hour exams”或具体考试名称。

× For the loan plan, I would like to become an excellent teacher in language teaching when uh I graduate 5.

✓ For the long-term plan, I would like to become an excellent teacher in language teaching when I graduate.

“loan plan”应为“long-term plan”，表示长期计划；“graduate 5”不合语法，应去掉数字“5”；“when I graduate”表示将来时间，使用一般现在时表示将来时间点。