Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to answer the question directly and clearly. Start with a simple sentence stating your status, then add relevant details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I am a master's student at National Tsinghua University in Taiwan, majoring in neuroscience. My research focuses on examining the effects of chronic corticosteroids.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly by stating the place you study. Then explain your reasons clearly using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear expressions.

Ejemplo: I study in Taiwan, although I originally come from Malaysia. I chose Taiwan because I love its culture, and Mandarin is widely spoken here, which is my mother tongue.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but try to improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific reasons why it is a good place to study.

Ejemplo: Yes, Taiwan is a great place to study because most people speak Mandarin, which is my mother tongue. This makes communication easier and helps me focus on my studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Explain what changes you want and why, using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like the study environment to be more comfortable, such as having better seating and quieter spaces, because this would help me concentrate and learn better.

Sugerencia: Answer the question clearly with correct grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas. Specify your plans and reasons for them.

Ejemplo: My future study plans include taking the IELTS test to achieve a good score. After that, I hope to participate in an exchange program in another country to improve my English and gain new experiences.

× I come from Taiwan or National Tsinghua University of master student and my major is neuroscience and my research made my research is to to examine the chronic corticosteroids.

✓ I come from Taiwan and I am a master's student at National Tsinghua University. My major is neuroscience and my research is to examine chronic corticosteroids.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors, including incorrect conjunction use and repetition. It should be split into clearer sentences with proper conjunctions and verb forms to improve clarity and grammar.

× I study in Taiwan and but I can't I come from Malaysia and Taiwan. Why I choose Taiwan because I love Taiwan culture and Taiwan is saying Mandarin. I always saying Mandarin in.

✓ I study in Taiwan, but I come from Malaysia. I chose Taiwan because I love Taiwanese culture and Mandarin is spoken here. I always speak Mandarin.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and conjunctions, and has awkward phrasing. 'I can't' is incorrect here, and 'Taiwan is saying Mandarin' should be 'Mandarin is spoken in Taiwan'. Also, 'I always saying Mandarin in' is incomplete and should be corrected to 'I always speak Mandarin.'

× For me is very good place to study because in this environment most people is talk about Mandarin and Mandarin is my mother language so I feel very good to study here.

✓ For me, it is a very good place to study because in this environment most people talk about Mandarin and Mandarin is my mother tongue, so I feel very good studying here.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'most people is talk' should be 'most people talk'. Also, 'mother language' is better expressed as 'mother tongue'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes I would like the change where I study to make some change because I think zoom out our comfortable zoom is more important for our life because it is can make me feel to learn.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some changes because I think a comfortable environment is more important for our life as it can help me feel motivated to learn.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and has unclear phrases like 'zoom out our comfortable zoom'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and uses modal verbs properly.

× My future study plans is I I need to examine the IELTS test and take the score, take the English examine and to exchange other country.

✓ My future study plans are to take the IELTS test and achieve a good score, take the English exam, and participate in an exchange program in another country.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors ('plans is' should be 'plans are') and awkward phrasing. 'Examine the IELTS test' is incorrect; it should be 'take the IELTS test'. The correction uses proper present tense and clearer expressions.