Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm chính xác các từ như "mathetic" (mathematics) và sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I am currently a 12th-grade high school student specializing in the science stream, which includes mathematics, physics, and chemistry. I find these subjects fascinating because they help me understand how the world works.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ (ví dụ: "I'm study" nên là "I study" hoặc "I'm studying"). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn để dễ hiểu.

Ejemplo: I study at Lombard High School, which is one of the most well-known high schools in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam. It has a strong reputation for both practical activities and academic excellence, which I really enjoy.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên luyện nói trôi chảy, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít ("facilities... are" thay vì "is").

Ejemplo: I think it depends on what you value most. On one hand, the teachers are of high quality and the academic performance is good. However, the school's facilities are somewhat outdated, which might affect the overall learning experience.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I hope the facilities at my school can be improved. Many devices and equipment, such as computers and lab tools, are old and outdated, which makes learning difficult. Therefore, upgrading them would greatly enhance the overall study environment.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "repair" thay vì "review" hoặc "prepare". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Ejemplo: I plan to take an entrance exam soon, so I am preparing by reviewing a lot of knowledge. I hope to achieve my goals and succeed in the future.

× now I'm specialized in natural stream which including mathetic, physics and chemistry subject

✓ now I'm specialized in the natural stream which includes mathematics, physics and chemistry subjects

The word 'stream' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the particular stream. 'Including' should be 'includes' to agree with singular 'stream'. 'Mathetic' is a misspelling of 'mathematics'. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to multiple subjects.

× I find this kind of UMM subject is very interesting because it make me understand more about how the world work

✓ I find this kind of subject very interesting because it makes me understand more about how the world works

'Subject' should be singular here as 'this kind of subject'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'it'. 'Work' should be 'works' to agree with singular 'world'.

× Actually, I'm study at Lombard High School

✓ Actually, I study at Lombard High School

'I'm study' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I study' for present simple tense.

× which is one of the most well known for high schools in Hanoi

✓ which is one of the most well-known high schools in Hanoi

'Well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as an adjective. The phrase 'for high schools' is incorrect; it should be 'high schools' as the noun being described.

× The capital of Vietnam is earned reputation for a lot of practical activities and academic reputation which make me feel very enjoyed

✓ The capital of Vietnam has earned a reputation for many practical activities and academic excellence, which makes me feel very happy

Incorrect sentence structure and word choice. 'Is earned reputation' should be 'has earned a reputation'. 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' is better here. 'Academic reputation' is repetitive; 'academic excellence' is clearer. 'Make me feel very enjoyed' is incorrect; 'makes me feel very happy' is correct.

× the facilities of the school is kind of outdated and rundown

✓ the facilities of the school are kind of outdated and rundown

'Facilities' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'.

× a lot of device and equipment like computers or lab equipment are very old and outdated

✓ a lot of devices and equipment like computers or lab equipment are very old and outdated

'Device' should be plural 'devices' to agree with 'a lot of'. 'Equipment' is uncountable and remains singular.

× I think that I'm gonna repair a lot of knowledge for it

✓ I think that I'm going to prepare a lot of knowledge for it

'Gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred in formal speech. 'Repair' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prepare' when talking about studying or getting ready.