Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够自然且有语法和表达错误，内容不够连贯，且部分句子难以理解。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明当前状态。

Ejemplo: I graduated from the China Academy of Art last June. Currently, I am taking a gap year to relax and prepare for my future studies.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，部分词汇使用不当。建议直接回答地点和专业，使用清晰的句子，并具体说明专业内容。

Ejemplo: I studied in Hangzhou. My major was Art and Technology, which combines design, biology, and programming. For my graduation project, I focused on bio-design, a relatively new field in China.

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但结尾部分表达不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免口语填充词，并清晰表达观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is a great place to study. The university offers many opportunities to learn from international artists and designers. I often attend talks and lectures, which help me gain new ideas.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较好，但有口语填充词影响流畅性。建议减少“umm”等词汇，使用更正式的表达，并具体说明合作的好处。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more collaboration with other universities through workshops or shared studio programs. This would create a stimulating learning environment.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，部分词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地表达未来计划，并避免不相关或错误的词汇。

Ejemplo: I plan to enroll in a business design program. My undergraduate studies made me realize I want to be a designer with business knowledge, so I hope to learn more about business thinking and creativity.

× It was pretty far healthy lessons.

✓ It was pretty far from healthy lessons.

这里原句中 'far healthy lessons' 结构不正确，应该是 'far from healthy lessons'，表示距离健康课程很远。'far' 后面需要跟介词 'from' 来表达距离。

× My parents didn't want me to be under too much pressure or at once.

✓ My parents didn't want me to be under too much pressure at once.

原句中 'or at once' 用法错误，应该是 'at once' 表示同时发生。'or' 在这里不合适，导致句意不清。

× Uh, I was started in Hangzhou.

✓ Uh, I started in Hangzhou.

这里 'was started' 是被动语态，且时态不对。应使用主动过去式 'started'，表示自己开始学习。

× which is highly interdisciplinary field, mixing design, biology and programming and more.

✓ which is a highly interdisciplinary field, mixing design, biology, programming and more.

'field' 是单数，前面需要加不定冠词 'a'。另外，列举时 'biology and programming and more' 应改为 'biology, programming and more'，用逗号分隔。

× I actually did my graduation projects on below your design.

✓ I actually did my graduation projects on bio-inspired design.

原句 'below your design' 语义不明，推测为 'bio-inspired design'（仿生设计），需要改正。

× Let's say that I think there couldn't be more chance to.

✓ Let's say that I think there couldn't be more chances to.

'chance' 应为复数 'chances'，因为后面暗示有多次机会。

× And I think there could be more chances to collaborate with other universities, maybe through workshops or share studio programs.

✓ And I think there could be more chances to collaborate with other universities, maybe through workshops or shared studio programs.

'share studio programs' 中 'share' 应为形容词过去分词 'shared'，修饰 'studio programs'。

× My undergraduate experience helped me realize I want to be a designer who also understands business.

✓ My undergraduate experience helped me realize I want to be a designer who also understands business.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× So I want to learn more about common recall I thinking and how creative.

✓ So I want to learn more about common logical thinking and how to be creative.

原句 'common recall I thinking' 语义不明，推测为 'common logical thinking'，并且 'how creative' 应改为 'how to be creative'，使句子完整。