Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“majoring in accounting and major in economics”可以简化为“majoring in accounting and economics”。此外，语法错误如“I'm very interest”应改为“I'm very interested”，并注意动词单复数形式，如“how the financial system work”应为“works”。建议回答更简洁自然，避免冗余。

Ejemplo: I'm a college student majoring in accounting and economics. In the future, I plan to pursue a master's degree in business analysis because I'm very interested in how the financial system works.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误，如“I enjoy study here”应为“I enjoy studying here”。另外，表达应更连贯自然，例如“it's university”表达不清晰。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I am currently studying at a university in South China. It ranks highly in the QS World University Rankings and has a modern campus with a great study environment. I really enjoy studying here.

Sugerencia: 回答未完成且句子结构不完整，缺少结尾。应避免句子过长且语法错误，如“it make it very easy for me to”应为“it makes it very easy for me to get around”。建议回答完整且使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Definitely. One important reason is that the university is located in the city center. Moreover, the campus has excellent facilities, including modern libraries. Additionally, it is very close to public transport like subways, which makes it easy for me to commute.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“if if you build 1 we can we don't need to wait in line for the communal 1”表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: I think the college dormitory should be improved because we currently don't have private bathrooms with showers. If private bathrooms were built, we wouldn't have to wait in line for the communal ones.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但“master degree”应为“master's degree”，且“nowadays employers always prefer”可改为“nowadays, employers often prefer”使表达更自然。建议丰富细节，使用更多连接词。

Ejemplo: I plan to pursue a master's degree in business analysis. This will open up more career opportunities because nowadays, employers often prefer candidates with professional data analysis skills.

× I'm a college student and I'm currently majoring in accounting and major in economics and I will pursue a master degree in business analysis in the future because I'm very interest.

✓ I'm a college student and I'm currently majoring in accounting and economics, and I will pursue a master's degree in business analysis in the future because I'm very interested.

master degree 应为 master's degree，表示硕士学位，属于所有格形式。interest 应为 interested，形容词形式，表示感兴趣。

× I'm very interested in how the financial system work.

✓ I'm very interested in how the financial system works.

financial system 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，故用 works。

× I should say it's university because it ranks highly in the world QS list and also the university is very modern and has great study environment.

✓ I should say it's a university because it ranks highly in the world QS list and also the university is very modern and has a great study environment.

university 前缺少不定冠词 a；study environment 前缺少不定冠词 a。

× I enjoy study here anyway.

✓ I enjoy studying here anyway.

enjoy 后应接动名词形式，故用 studying。

× ...and it make it very easy for me to.

✓ ...and it makes it very easy for me.

make 应用第三人称单数形式 makes；句子不完整，去掉不完整部分。

× I think the dormitory of the college should be improved because we don't have the private bathroom with the shower till now.

✓ I think the dormitory of the college should be improved because we don't have a private bathroom with a shower until now.

bathroom 和 shower 前应加不定冠词 a；till now 更正式表达为 until now。

× I think if if you build 1 we can we don't need to wait in line for the communal 1.

✓ I think if you build one, we won't need to wait in line for the communal one.

数字 1 应写为 one；句子结构调整使其更通顺；使用否定形式 won't need。