Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免冗长且重复的信息，建议将句子简化并更自然地表达。

Ejemplo: I'm a third-year university student majoring in International Chinese Language Education.

Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富且具体，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I study at Beijing International Studies University. Although the campus is quite small—it only takes five minutes to walk across—it is very beautiful, especially in spring when the flowers bloom.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议注意语法准确性并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: I think it's a good place to study because the campus is small, so students can reach their classrooms quickly. For example, if my class starts at 8 AM, I can even wake up at 7:55, which makes me feel less stressed.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，同时表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Honestly, I usually prefer stability and don't like changes. However, if the changes bring positive benefits, I would accept them. For instance, I would be very happy if the canteen offered more delicious food.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达并注意语法准确性。

Ejemplo: Firstly, I plan to continue studying my major and complete my college education. Then, I hope to go abroad for further studies to deepen my knowledge in foreign language teaching.

× It I think it's a good place to study because it's a really small campus so I can so students can arrive their classrooms in a very short time.

✓ I think it's a good place to study because it's a really small campus so students can arrive at their classrooms in a very short time.

句子中出现了多余的“It”，且“can so students can”结构重复，应删除多余部分。此外，“arrive their classrooms”缺少介词“at”，应为“arrive at their classrooms”。

× I think it's a good place to study because it's a really small campus so I can so students can arrive their classrooms in a very short time.

✓ I think it's a good place to study because it's a really small campus so students can arrive at their classrooms in a very short time.

动词“arrive”后应接介词“at”，表示到达某地，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× This make me feel less stressed.

✓ This makes me feel less stressed.

主语“This”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“makes”。

× I'm a person who don't like changes because I prefer stability.

✓ I'm a person who doesn't like changes because I prefer stability.

先行词“who”指代第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用doesn't而非don't。

× But if the changes can bring positive benefits, then I will accept.

✓ But if the changes can bring positive benefits, then I will accept them.

动词“accept”后应有宾语，缺少宾语“them”导致句子不完整。

× For example, if the canteen can provide more delicious food for us, I will be greatly delighted.

✓ For example, if the canteen can provide more delicious food for us, I will be greatly delighted.

该句无明显语法错误，保持不变。

× So firstly I would like to study further in my major and finish my college and education and I would like to go border go abroad for further education.

✓ So firstly, I would like to study further in my major and finish my college education, and I would like to go abroad for further education.

句子中“finish my college and education”结构不完整，应为“finish my college education”；“go border go abroad”重复，应删除“go border”。

× I want to learn more about this major and the whole fields of foreign language teaching.

✓ I want to learn more about this major and the whole field of foreign language teaching.

“fields”应为单数“field”，表示整个领域，符合语境。