Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免语法错误和用词不当，如“major in law”应为“majoring in law”，“bound with”应为“bond with”。同时，回答应更简洁自然，避免冗余。

Ejemplo: I'm currently a law student, and I really enjoy my time at university. I have the opportunity to learn various subjects and meet people from diverse backgrounds.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“which located”应为“which is located”，“senior”应为“scenery”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，表达更准确。

Ejemplo: I study at Dian University, which is located in the northeast of China. It is near the coast and faces a mountain, so the scenery there is really beautiful and refreshing.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和词汇使用不准确，如“performers”应为“professors”，“kindness and strong”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和连词，使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Absolutely. It's a comfortable place to study because the atmosphere is harmonious. The relationships between classmates and professors are friendly and supportive. Moreover, the surrounding scenery is very pleasant.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it have”应为“it is”，句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Ejemplo: Not really, I think the university is already good enough. The environment is friendly and lively, the roads are clean and wide, and the classrooms are spacious.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，如“change my measure”应为“change my major”，“benefit for my fewer career”表达不清。建议使用简单准确的句子表达未来计划。

Ejemplo: I plan to change my major because law is quite difficult for me. I would like to study marketing or economics in the future, as they will be more beneficial for my career.

× I'm still a student major in law.

✓ I'm still a student majoring in law.

动词后接动名词形式表示正在进行的动作或状态，'major'后应接动名词'majoring'，表示主修。

× I really enjoy the time when I'm staying in school.

✓ I really enjoy the time when I'm staying at school.

动词'stay'后接介词'at'表示在某地停留，且'enjoy'后接动名词，'staying'用法正确，但介词需改为'at'。

× More importantly, I can bound with a wide variety of people.

✓ More importantly, I can bond with a wide variety of people.

'bound'是'bind'的过去式或过去分词，表达'建立联系'应使用'bond'，表示建立关系。

× I study in Dian University which located in the North East of China.

✓ I study at Dian University, which is located in the Northeast of China.

定语从句缺少系动词'is'，且介词应为'at'表示在某学校学习。

× More importantly is near the coast and in front of a mountain, so the senior there is really beautiful.

✓ More importantly, it is near the coast and in front of a mountain, so the scenery there is really beautiful.

'senior'用词错误，应为'scenery'表示风景；句子缺主语，需加'it'；'More importantly'后应加逗号。

× It can always nourish my senses after.

✓ It can always nourish my senses afterwards.

'after'用法不当，副词应为'ad afterwards'表示之后。

× The relationship between the classmates and the performers are kindness and strong.

✓ The relationship between the classmates and the performers is kind and strong.

主语是单数'relationship'，谓语动词应为单数'is'；'kindness'是名词，形容词应为'kind'。

× More importantly, the scene near there is very good.

✓ More importantly, the scenery near there is very good.

'scene'指场景，'scenery'指风景，语境应使用不可数名词'scenery'。

× Not really, since I believe it have already good enough.

✓ Not really, since I believe it is already good enough.

'it'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应为'is'，且缺少系动词。

× The environment is friendly and lively, the road is clean and wide and the classroom is also big enough for these students, so I think it's not.

✓ The environment is friendly and lively, the road is clean and wide, and the classroom is also big enough for the students, so I think it's fine.

句子缺少连词，需用逗号和'and'连接；'these students'改为'the students'更自然；'so I think it's not'表达不完整，改为'so I think it's fine'。

× I want to change my measure since the law is so difficult for me and I would like to learn more about the marketing or economics in my further study which is benefit for my fewer career.

✓ I want to change my major since law is so difficult for me, and I would like to learn more about marketing or economics in my further study, which will benefit my future career.

'measure'用词错误，应为'major'表示专业；'the marketing'和'economics'前不加冠词；'which is benefit'应为'which will benefit'；'fewer career'错误，应为'future career'。