Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời không nên quá dài hoặc lặp lại.

Ejemplo: I am currently a student at the Academy of Finance. I chose this major because my mother is a banker, and she has inspired me to follow a similar career path.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ, nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng, câu văn mạch lạc và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I study at the Academy of Finance, a well-known university in Hanoi. I chose it because I want to improve my skills and gain experience, which will help me have better career opportunities in the future.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi về số nhiều, đồng thời dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, the Academy of Finance is a good place to study because it offers various programs for students. Moreover, it provides a lot of financial knowledge and helps improve students' skills for their future careers.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt lủng củng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like the university to offer a wider range of courses. This would give me more opportunities in my future career.

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều từ thừa, lặp lại khiến câu trả lời không tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I am not sure about my future study plans yet, but I would like to work in a corporate environment. I believe this will help me improve my skills and gain practical experience.

× Actually I'm choose my major because I want to follow in my mother full state as he's a screen banker and she's has inspired for me.

✓ Actually I'm choosing my major because I want to follow in my mother's footsteps as he is a screen banker and she has inspired me.

The verb 'choose' should be in the present continuous form 'choosing' to indicate an ongoing action. Also, 'mother full state' is incorrect; it should be 'mother's footsteps'. 'He's' should be 'he is' or 'he's', but the context is unclear; likely 'he is a screen banker' is intended. 'She's has inspired for me' is incorrect; it should be 'she has inspired me'. The sentence needs correction for verb forms and possessive usage.

× Actually I'm choose my major because I want to follow in my mother full state as he's a screen banker and she's has inspired for me.

✓ Actually I'm choosing my major because I want to follow in my mother's footsteps as he is a screen banker and she has inspired me.

The pronouns 'he's' and 'she's' are incorrectly used here. 'He's' should be 'he is' and 'she's has' is incorrect; it should be 'she has'. Also, 'my mother full state' is incorrect; it should be 'my mother's footsteps' to indicate following her career path.

× Actually I'm choose my major because I want to follow in my mother full state as he's a screen banker and she's has inspired for me.

✓ Actually I'm choosing my major because I want to follow in my mother's footsteps as he is a screen banker and she has inspired me.

The phrase 'in my mother full state' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my mother's footsteps'. Also, 'inspired for me' is incorrect; it should be 'inspired me'. The prepositions 'in' and 'for' are misused here.

× Actually, I am studying at Academy of Finance which is a famous university in Hanoi.

✓ Actually, I am studying at the Academy of Finance, which is a famous university in Hanoi.

The sentence is mostly correct, but the definite article 'the' is missing before 'Academy of Finance'. This is an article error, but since the problem type list includes article errors separately, this is noted there.

× Actually, I am studying at Academy of Finance which is a famous university in Hanoi.

✓ Actually, I am studying at the Academy of Finance, which is a famous university in Hanoi.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Academy of Finance' because it is a specific institution. Omitting 'the' is an article error.

× Therefore I can more opportunity in a career in the future.

✓ Therefore, I can have more opportunities in a career in the future.

The sentence lacks a verb after 'can' and the noun 'opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. The correct structure is 'can have more opportunities'. Also, a comma after 'Therefore' improves clarity.

× Therefore I can more opportunity in a career in the future.

✓ Therefore, I can have more opportunities in a career in the future.

The quantifier 'more' should be used with plural countable nouns, so 'opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. Also, the verb 'have' is missing after 'can'.

× because its have a very various measure for a student and besides it can bring a lot of financial knowledge and improve their skill in the future.

✓ because it has a variety of measures for students and besides, it can bring a lot of financial knowledge and improve their skills in the future.

The pronoun 'its' is incorrect; it should be 'it has'. 'A very various measure' is incorrect; 'a variety of measures' is correct. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'measures'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match 'their'.

× because its have a very various measure for a student and besides it can bring a lot of financial knowledge and improve their skill in the future.

✓ because it has a variety of measures for students and besides, it can bring a lot of financial knowledge and improve their skills in the future.

The noun 'measure' should be plural 'measures' to agree with 'a variety of'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural 'measures'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to agree with 'their'.

× If I had a opportunity, I would like to decide, uh, the end you is has a wide range, a wide range of a measure and I think it's can bring more opportunity in career for me in my future.

✓ If I had an opportunity, I would like to decide, uh, the university has a wide range, a wide range of measures and I think it can bring more opportunities in my career in the future.

The pronouns and articles are incorrect. 'a opportunity' should be 'an opportunity'. 'the end you is has' is unclear and likely meant to be 'the university has'. 'a wide range of a measure' should be 'a wide range of measures'. 'it's can' should be 'it can'. 'opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. 'in career' should be 'in my career'.

× If I had a opportunity, I would like to decide, uh, the end you is has a wide range, a wide range of a measure and I think it's can bring more opportunity in career for me in my future.

✓ If I had an opportunity, I would like to decide, uh, the university has a wide range, a wide range of measures and I think it can bring more opportunities in my career in the future.

The article 'a' before 'opportunity' should be 'an' because 'opportunity' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'a wide range of a measure' should be 'a wide range of measures'.

× If I had a opportunity, I would like to decide, uh, the end you is has a wide range, a wide range of a measure and I think it's can bring more opportunity in career for me in my future.

✓ If I had an opportunity, I would like to decide, uh, the university has a wide range, a wide range of measures and I think it can bring more opportunities in my career in the future.

The phrase 'it's can' is incorrect; 'it can' is correct. Modal verbs like 'can' should not be combined with 'is' or 'has'.

× and I think it's can bring more opportunity in career for me in my future.

✓ and I think it can bring more opportunities in my career in the future.

The preposition 'in career' is incorrect; it should be 'in my career'. Also, 'in my future' is better expressed as 'in the future'.

× Umm, I'm not sure, but uh, starting at Academy.

✓ Umm, I'm not sure, but uh, starting at the Academy.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'Academy'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; it likely needs more context or correction.

× Umm, I'm not sure, but uh, starting at Academy.

✓ Umm, I'm not sure, but uh, starting at the Academy.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Academy' because it refers to a specific institution.

× So I would like to work corporate environments because I think it can uh, enhance my skill, my skill and umm, gain practical experience in my future.

✓ So I would like to work in corporate environments because I think it can, uh, enhance my skills and, umm, help me gain practical experience in the future.

The preposition 'in' is missing after 'work'. 'My skill' should be plural 'my skills'. Also, 'gain practical experience in my future' is better expressed as 'gain practical experience in the future'.