Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural by correcting the article usage and making the sentences more concise. Also, avoid repeating information unnecessarily. For example, instead of saying 'a Assistant Managing Director', say 'an Assistant Managing Director'.

Ejemplo: I currently work as an Assistant Managing Director at Asra Homes, a real estate company located in Gurgaon.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'in a marriage Siddharth University'. Also, the sentence structure can be improved for clarity and naturalness. Try to directly state the university name and your degree.

Ejemplo: I studied at Maharshi Dayanand University in Rohtak, where I completed my Bachelor of Business Administration degree in 2017.

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive but somewhat repetitive and lacks specific supporting details. Try to avoid repeating words like 'university' and 'good'. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is an excellent university because it has received several international awards and offers quality education, making it one of the top institutions in my country.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but can be more concise and natural. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'maintain the gardens and the gym area more', say 'improve the maintenance of the gardens and gym'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would suggest some improvements, such as better hygiene in the cafeteria and improved maintenance of the gardens and gym facilities.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be more concise and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I plan to pursue a Master of Business Administration in Canada to build on my BBA degree from India and gain international experience.

× Currently, I work as a Assistant Managing Director in a company called Asra Homes.

✓ Currently, I work as an Assistant Managing Director in a company called Asra Homes.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'Assistant'. This is a common article usage rule in English to ensure smooth pronunciation.

× I used to study in a marriage Siddharth University Rohtak.

✓ I used to study at Maharshi Siddharth University Rohtak.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is used to indicate the place of study. Also, 'marriage' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'Maharshi' as the proper noun for the university name.

× It is one of the best institution in my country.

✓ It is one of the best institutions in my country.

The phrase 'one of the best' requires the noun to be plural ('institutions') because it refers to one among many.