Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai tên riêng (ví dụ: 'Toilet City' có thể là lỗi phát âm hoặc viết sai). Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về trường học.

Ejemplo: I am currently a high school student at a well-known school in Ho Chi Minh City. It is a specialized school for gifted students and has achieved many awards over the years. The environment there is very supportive for student development.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc và có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và mô tả cụ thể hơn về môi trường học tập.

Ejemplo: I study at Tokyo City Todok High School in Ho Chi Minh City. It is an exciting place with energetic students, which creates a great atmosphere for communication and interaction.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi sai và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao trường là nơi tốt để học. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về ưu điểm của trường.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because the school has many qualified teachers who help students improve their skills effectively.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cụ thể về những thay đổi bạn muốn thấy ở trường. Sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe schools should keep up with global changes by adopting new teaching methods and technologies to help students learn more effectively.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trình bày kế hoạch học tập một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy nói rõ các bước bạn sẽ làm trong tương lai.

Ejemplo: I plan to finish high school by the age of 18. After that, I will take the SAT exam and then pursue higher education at the University of Economics in Ho Chi Minh City.

× It is a karma school, it contains the gifted students and it gain a lot of achievement every year and it's also a successful environment for students to develop and drive to drive everything.

✓ It is a karma school, it contains gifted students and it gains a lot of achievements every year and it's also a successful environment for students to develop and strive for everything.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'gains' (third person singular). 'Achievement' should be plural 'achievements' because it refers to multiple accomplishments. Also, 'drive to drive everything' is unclear; 'strive for everything' is more appropriate.

× Well, I study at the Tokyo City Todok High School in Ho Chi Minh City. It is really a exciting environment and energetic and energetic students for for us to communicate and also interact with.

✓ Well, I study at the Tokyo City Todok High School in Ho Chi Minh City. It is really an exciting environment with energetic students for us to communicate and interact with.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'exciting'. The phrase 'energetic and energetic students' is repetitive; it should be 'energetic students'. Also, 'for for' is a repetition error and should be 'for'. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'with' to connect 'environment' and 'students'.

× Yes, of course I think it is very good because it have a phone of the good identities for for students to improve such as they can have the the qualifica the qualified professors.

✓ Yes, of course I think it is very good because it has a number of good facilities for students to improve, such as qualified professors.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'A phone of the good identities' is incorrect; likely intended 'a number of good facilities'. 'The the qualifica the qualified professors' is unclear and redundant; corrected to 'qualified professors'.

× Yes, I think because in the world there are a lot of the changes and also there's schools should should pursue, pursue it to have some new developments and also new tables about how to teach students more effectively and have more effective.

✓ Yes, I think because in the world there are a lot of changes and schools should pursue new developments and new methods on how to teach students more effectively.

The phrase 'there's schools' is incorrect; it should be 'there are schools'. Repetition of 'should should pursue, pursue' is an error. 'New tables' is likely a mistranslation or misuse; 'new methods' or 'new approaches' is more appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Well, I think that I will learn. I will learn high school when I were two, when I was 18, and after that I will take the exam.

✓ Well, I think that I will study in high school until I am 18, and after that I will take the exam.

The phrase 'when I were two' is incorrect; 'were' should be 'was' for singular first person past tense, but the meaning is unclear. Likely intended 'until I am 18'. The verb 'learn' is better replaced with 'study' in this context. The sentence is corrected for tense and clarity.

× I will test, SAT test and study the higher education in the Economic University in Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ I will take the SAT test and study higher education at the Economic University in Ho Chi Minh City.

The verb 'test' should be 'take the test' in English. 'Study the higher education' is incorrect; it should be 'study higher education'. The preposition 'in' is better replaced with 'at' when referring to a university.