Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用簡潔的句子說明你的專業和學習內容，避免重複。

Ejemplo: I am a student majoring in Leisure and Sport Management at National Taipei University. My course focuses on managing sports events.

Sugerencia: 回答中語法錯誤較多，且內容不夠清晰。建議你用簡單明確的句子描述你在哪裡學習，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

Ejemplo: I am currently studying in another city. This new city has many fun places, such as the famous Old Street, which I like to visit.

Sugerencia: 回答有重複且語法不夠自然。建議你避免重複表達，並使用更自然的連接詞和詞彙。

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a great place to study because there are many delicious snacks and convenient transportation for students.

Sugerencia: 回答結構不錯，但語法和用詞可更自然。建議你使用更地道的表達方式，並注意單複數和冠詞的使用。

Ejemplo: No, I don't think the place needs any changes because it has sufficient facilities, beautiful views, and delicious food.

Sugerencia: 回答中時態和語法有誤，且表達不夠流暢。建議你使用正確的時態，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

Ejemplo: In the future, I want to study abroad to advance my degree and learn about different cultures, languages, and skills. I don't plan to work now.

× Actually I'm a student and my major is Leisure and Sport Management in National Taipei University and this course told me to to manage events sports.

✓ Actually I'm a student and my major is Leisure and Sport Management at National Taipei University and this course teaches me to manage sports events.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'told me to to manage events sports'. The verb 'told' is not appropriate here; 'teaches me to manage' fits better to express the course's function. Also, 'events sports' is incorrect word order; it should be 'sports events'. Additionally, 'in National Taipei University' should be 'at National Taipei University' because 'at' is the correct preposition for institutions. Suggestions: Use 'teaches me to manage sports events' and 'at National Taipei University'.

× Now I'm studying at another city.

✓ Now I'm studying in another city.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to a city. The correct preposition is 'in' because cities are locations that require 'in'. Suggestion: Use 'in another city' instead of 'at another city'.

× Now my old country, this new city have many fun thing and we can I like go to the Old Street is famous place for everyone.

✓ Now my old country, this new city has many fun things and I like to go to the Old Street, which is a famous place for everyone.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'this new city have' should be 'this new city has' (subject-verb agreement), 'fun thing' should be plural 'fun things', and the sentence structure is confusing. Also, 'we can I like go' is incorrect; it should be 'I like to go'. 'Old Street is famous place' needs an article: 'a famous place'. Suggestions: Correct subject-verb agreement, pluralize 'things', fix sentence structure, and add articles.

× Now my old country, this new city have many fun thing and we can I like go to the Old Street is famous place for everyone.

✓ Now my old country, this new city has many fun things and I like to go to the Old Street, which is a famous place for everyone.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'this new city'; it should be 'has'. Also, 'fun thing' should be plural 'fun things'. The sentence also contains other errors but focusing on subject-verb agreement here. Suggestion: Use 'has' for singular subjects.

× Now my old country, this new city have many fun thing and we can I like go to the Old Street is famous place for everyone.

✓ Now my old country, this new city has many fun things and I like to go to the Old Street, which is a famous place for everyone.

The phrase 'go to the Old Street is famous place' is incorrect. It should be 'go to the Old Street, which is a famous place'. Also, 'Old Street' requires the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: Use 'go to the Old Street, which is a famous place'.

× Now my old country, this new city have many fun thing and we can I like go to the Old Street is famous place for everyone.

✓ Now my old country, this new city has many fun things and I like to go to the Old Street, which is a famous place for everyone.

The phrase 'Old Street is famous place' lacks the definite article 'a' before 'famous place'. Also, 'Old Street' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a specific place. Suggestion: Use 'the Old Street' and 'a famous place'.

× Yes, I think it's a good place to study because there are many delicious snacks and it has a convenience transportation for students.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to study because there are many delicious snacks and it has convenient transportation for students.

The phrase 'a convenience transportation' is incorrect. 'Transportation' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by an adjective, not 'a convenience'. The correct adjective is 'convenient'. Suggestion: Use 'convenient transportation' without 'a'.

× So I think it's good place to study.

✓ So I think it's a good place to study.

The phrase 'good place' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'place'. Suggestion: Use 'a good place'.

× No, I don't think this plan needs to make any change because it has enough facilities for me and there are many beautiful views and delicious food.

✓ No, I don't think this place needs to make any changes because it has enough facilities for me and there are many beautiful views and delicious food.

The word 'plan' is incorrect in context; it should be 'place' referring to the study location. Also, 'any change' should be plural 'any changes' to match common usage. Suggestion: Use 'place' instead of 'plan' and 'any changes' instead of 'any change'.

× In my future, I wanted to study abroad to advance my degrees, to learn different culture, different language and different skills.

✓ In my future, I want to study abroad to advance my degrees, to learn different cultures, different languages, and different skills.

The verb 'wanted' is past tense but the sentence refers to future plans, so present tense 'want' is correct. Also, 'culture' and 'language' should be plural to match 'different'. Suggestion: Use present tense 'want' and plural forms 'cultures' and 'languages'.