Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语法和表达需更准确，避免语法错误和不完整句子。可以简洁明了地表达身份和专业。

Ejemplo: I am currently a postgraduate student at Shanghai Maritime University, majoring in communication engineering. I look forward to graduating next year because I find my major very interesting.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，需避免句子残缺，使用连词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I study in Shanghai, a major international city in eastern China. It is a beautiful city with many parks and convenient transportation. Since I live near the sea, I often enjoy the sounds of leaves and birds, which makes studying there pleasant.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但用词和表达可更自然，避免重复和不准确的词汇。

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a great place to study. I live in Pudong, a district in Shanghai close to the sea, which means the air is fresh and the transportation is convenient. Additionally, the beautiful surroundings and the sounds of waves and birds create a peaceful environment.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅，建议简洁明了地表达观点并避免重复。

Ejemplo: No, I am satisfied with the place where I study. It has fresh air, convenient transportation, and friendly people. I cannot think of any reason to change it.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用完整句子并清楚表达计划和原因。

Ejemplo: I look forward to graduating next year, and I plan to pursue a PhD in communication engineering. I am especially interested in topics like energy efficiency and spectrum efficiency in communication systems.

× The looking forward to graduating next year.

✓ I'm looking forward to graduating next year.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× My major is communication engineering which is very interesting.

✓ My major is communication engineering, which is very interesting.

关系从句前应加逗号，表示非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的内容。

× I currently study in Shanghai, a major international city in eastern China, so it's a very beautiful city with plenty of parks and convenient transportations.

✓ I currently study in Shanghai, a major international city in eastern China, so it's a very beautiful city with plenty of parks and convenient transportation.

transportation是不可数名词，不能用复数形式transportations。

× Because I live near to the sea, sometimes I can hear the sounds of leaves and the birds.

✓ Because I live near the sea, sometimes I can hear the sounds of leaves and the birds.

near后面直接接名词，不需要介词to。

× Also I enjoy seeing.

✓ Also, I enjoy seeing them.

句子缺少宾语，导致表达不完整，应补充宾语。

× People around me know is very friendly.

✓ People around me are very friendly.

主语people是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，且know用法错误。

× I can't I can't think any reason to change another one.

✓ I can't think of any reason to change to another one.

句子重复且缺少介词of，表达不完整，应调整句子结构。

× Well, I looking forward to graduating next year and I plan to pursue my PhD study in field of communication engineering because it was it is really interesting and attracted me especially the energy efficiency and the spectrum efficiency in various communication.

✓ Well, I am looking forward to graduating next year and I plan to pursue my PhD study in the field of communication engineering because it is really interesting and attracts me, especially the energy efficiency and the spectrum efficiency in various communication.

缺少be动词am，时态不一致，动词attracted应为现在时attracts，缺少冠词the。