Part 1
Examinador
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidato
Yes, I am a student at annual high school.
Examinador
Where do you study?
Candidato
I study at class 12 B 2 of Anzio High School.
Examinador
Is it a good place to study?
Candidato
I think it's also a good place to study, but it's not very good in my city, although it's near my house.
Examinador
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Candidato
Yes, my school is celebrate. A 60 years set up and is is make any change?
Examinador
What are your future study plans?
Candidato
Are they blended the traditional with? Online.
Do you work or are you a student?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, ví dụ: "I am a student." và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "annual high school".
Ejemplo: I am a student at Anzio High School.
Where do you study?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu hơi ngắn và thiếu liên kết. Bạn có thể thêm một câu mô tả ngắn về lớp học hoặc trường để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ejemplo: I study in class 12 B 2 at Anzio High School, which is a well-known school in my city.
Is it a good place to study?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời hơi mơ hồ và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ý kiến của mình và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: I think it is a good place to study because it is quiet and close to my house, but some facilities could be improved compared to other schools in my city.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, nêu rõ những thay đổi bạn muốn và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh.
Ejemplo: Yes, I would like my school to renovate the old buildings since it has been established for over 60 years.
What are your future study plans?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời không đầy đủ và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, nêu kế hoạch học tập tương lai một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc.
Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to combine traditional classroom learning with online courses to improve my skills.
× Yes, I am a student at annual high school.
✓ Yes, I am a student at an annual high school.
The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'annual high school' because 'annual' starts with a vowel sound. In English, 'an' is used before words starting with vowel sounds to make the sentence grammatically correct.
× I study at class 12 B 2 of Anzio High School.
✓ I study in class 12 B 2 of Anzio High School.
The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'class'. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being inside a class or grade level.
× I think it's also a good place to study, but it's not very good in my city, although it's near my house.
✓ I think it's a good place to study, but it's not the best in my city, although it's near my house.
The phrase 'not very good' is vague and 'the best' is more appropriate to compare places in the city. Also, 'also' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for clarity.
× Yes, my school is celebrate. A 60 years set up and is is make any change?
✓ Yes, my school is celebrating its 60th anniversary, and it is making some changes.
The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and structure. 'Is celebrate' should be 'is celebrating' (present participle for ongoing action). 'A 60 years set up' is unclear; it should be 'its 60th anniversary'. 'Is is make any change?' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'it is making some changes'.
× Are they blended the traditional with? Online.
✓ Are they blending the traditional with online methods?
The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Are they blended' should be 'Are they blending' (present continuous). The question should be complete and clear, so 'the traditional with online methods' is added to clarify the meaning.