Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“strong interest”和“want to engage in related works”。建议用更具体的词汇描述专业兴趣。

Ejemplo: I'm a student at Northeast Forestry University, majoring in Logistics Engineering because I'm fascinated by supply chain management and hope to build a career in this field.

Sugerencia: 回答自然且内容具体，使用了连接词“additionally”，但可以稍微简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: I usually study at home since it's quiet and comfortable, which helps me focus. Also, I can adjust the lighting and temperature to create the ideal study environment.

Sugerencia: 回答内容重复了前一个问题的内容，缺乏新信息。建议增加具体细节或个人感受，避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, it's an excellent place to study because the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate, and being able to adjust the lighting and temperature makes me feel comfortable and focused.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误（"if the place I started to make some changes"），表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would appreciate some changes, such as updated libraries and study areas. Moreover, faster Wi-Fi, more computers, and additional green spaces for relaxation would greatly improve the study environment.

Sugerencia: 回答简洁且直接，但“future study plan”应为复数形式“future study plans”，且可以稍作扩展说明理由。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don't have immediate future study plans because I want to gain practical work experience first, which I believe will help me in my further studies later on.

× Yes, I would appreciate if the place I started to make some changes.

✓ Yes, I would appreciate it if the place started to make some changes.

此处缺少形式宾语“it”，正确表达为“I would appreciate it if...”，表示假设条件句。

× To be honest, I don't have immediate future study plan.

✓ To be honest, I don't have an immediate future study plan.

名词短语前缺少冠词“an”，且“plan”应为单数形式，表示“一个计划”。