Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时时态使用不准确，且句子结构不完整，建议使用正确的时态和完整句子表达。

Ejemplo: I have been working for about 10 years since I graduated in 2015.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地介绍学校和专业。

Ejemplo: I studied at the Nanyang Academy of Fine Arts in Singapore, where I majored in theater.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但句子连接不够流畅，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because I have liked Singapore since I was a child. Therefore, after finishing high school, I asked my parents if I could study there, and they agreed.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议用完整句子清晰表达观点。

Ejemplo: No, I don't think any changes are necessary because my school already produces many talented artists in Singapore.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不连贯，建议用简洁明了的句子表达未来学习计划。

Ejemplo: At the moment, I don't have any plans to study further because I graduated 10 years ago and need to focus on work to support myself financially.

× I already worked for about 10 years.

✓ I have already worked for about 10 years.

这里需要使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的动作，不能用一般过去时。

× I was graduate at 2015.

✓ I graduated in 2015.

graduate是动词，过去式是graduated，且时间点用介词in而非at。

× I was studying in Singapore before I my school called Nail Academy of Fine Arts.

✓ I was studying in Singapore before I went to my school called Nail Academy of Fine Arts.

缺少动词went，且时态应为过去时。

× It's a art school in Singapore and my major is theater.

✓ It's an art school in Singapore and my major is theater.

art以元音音素开头，前面应使用不定冠词an。

× So when I finished my high school, I asked my parents if I can go to Singapore for my. University.

✓ So when I finished my high school, I asked my parents if I could go to Singapore for my university.

表示过去的请求，情态动词应使用could而非can。

× And I got the answer.

✓ And I got their answer.

缺少宾语，需明确回答的对象。

× Well, not ready, I think my. School is already good enough, which is. Make a lot of. Art Person. In Singapore.

✓ Well, not really, I think my school is already good enough, which has produced a lot of artists in Singapore.

句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，且art person应为artists。

× Well, for now I don't have any plan of study because 'cause I already graduate for 10 years for now bye.

✓ Well, for now I don't have any plan to study because I graduated 10 years ago.

时态错误，表示过去完成的动作应使用过去式graduated，且表达时间点用ago。

× I have men drop and I have to. Our money so I don't have time to study.

✓ I have to work and earn money, so I don't have time to study.

句子不完整且词语错误，men drop无意义，应表达工作赚钱的意思。