Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有些語法錯誤和不連貫，建議你在回答時使用完整句子，並且避免斷句過短或不完整。可以先直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話補充細節，保持語句流暢且自然。

Ejemplo: I'm currently a junior student at Taejon University, majoring in English and Literature. I have learned a lot from my studies here, and I am planning to continue my education by attending graduate school in the future.

Sugerencia: 回答時要注意句子結構完整，避免斷句不連貫。可以先直接回答問題，再用連接詞補充細節，使回答更自然且有條理。

Ejemplo: I study in Taejon, which is my hometown. It only takes me about 20 minutes to get to the university from my house.

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，建議使用完整且連貫的句子，並用連接詞連接想法，使回答更清晰。

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I really like living in this city because it has great weather and convenient public transportation, which makes studying here very enjoyable.

Sugerencia: 回答不夠清楚且語法錯誤較多，建議先直接回答問題，再用簡單明確的句子說明原因或想法，避免使用不正確的詞彙。

Ejemplo: I don't have many wishes for changes at my university because I focus more on becoming independent and contributing to society through my work.

Sugerencia: 回答中有語法和用詞錯誤，建議使用完整句子並清楚表達計劃，避免斷句和不確定的語氣。

Ejemplo: I plan to enter an ideal graduate school to further my studies in business. This is my main goal for this summer.

× An I study at.

✓ And I study at.

The original sentence 'An I study at.' contains a typo and incomplete structure. 'An' should be 'And' to connect the sentence properly. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be connected to the following information for clarity.

× The major calling English and literature.

✓ My major is called English and Literature.

The phrase 'The major calling English and literature.' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct form is 'My major is called English and Literature.' to properly express the subject and verb relationship.

× I'm thinking. Going to start study further up at the post Graduate School.

✓ I'm thinking of going to start studying further at the postgraduate school.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms. 'Going to start study' should be 'going to start studying' to use the gerund form after 'start'. Also, 'post Graduate School' should be 'postgraduate school' as one word and lowercase.

× I study at Taejon, my hometown, and it just. Took me. 20 minutes to go there from my house.

✓ I study at Taejon, my hometown, and it just takes me 20 minutes to go there from my house.

The sentence is fragmented and uses past tense 'took' incorrectly for a habitual action. 'Took' should be 'takes' to indicate present habitual action, and the sentence should be continuous without unnecessary periods.

× I just really liked I joined this city and.

✓ I really like living in this city.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I just really liked I joined this city and.' is incorrect. The intended meaning is better expressed as 'I really like living in this city.'

× It is such a pleasure to study at this kind of city, which has a great weather and. Well, form transportation.

✓ It is such a pleasure to study in this kind of city, which has great weather and good public transportation.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect; 'in' is used for cities. 'A great weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'Well, form transportation' is unclear and should be 'good public transportation'.

× I really hope so but I just study and a local university but I'm not wish that much so.

✓ I really hope so, but I just study at a local university and I don't wish for much.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect word choices. 'Study and a local university' should be 'study at a local university'. 'I'm not wish that much so' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I don't wish for much'.

× And the priority for me is to become the man and become independent, independent men to a lot of works and doing it for our society.

✓ My priority is to become a man and become independent, to do a lot of work and contribute to our society.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect phrases. 'Become the man' should be 'become a man'. 'Independent men to a lot of works' is incorrect; it should be 'become independent, to do a lot of work'. 'Doing it for our society' is better expressed as 'contribute to our society'.

× Well I'm planning to get into ideal post Graduate School and learn further. In business? And that is just my. Targets to to do in this summer.

✓ Well, I'm planning to get into an ideal postgraduate school and study further in business. That is just my target to do this summer.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect punctuation and word choice. 'Ideal post Graduate School' should be 'an ideal postgraduate school'. 'Learn further. In business?' should be 'study further in business.' 'Targets to to do in this summer' should be 'target to do this summer'.