Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some redundancy. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I have recently graduated from high school in the US and currently work part-time as a dental assistant at a clinic. Meanwhile, I am actively looking for a full-time job in the healthcare field.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, avoiding repeated phrases. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I have recently graduated from MMCD Dental College, which is one of the top-ranked and most prestigious dental colleges in India.

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive but contains repetition and lacks supporting details. Try to give a clear opinion and add specific reasons or examples to support your view, using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. In my opinion, it is one of the best dental schools I have heard of because of its excellent faculty and modern facilities.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question well but has some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, although studying at the college was a wonderful experience, I would like to see improvements in the quality of food provided, as it was often unhealthy and lacked nutrition.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your future plans with proper vocabulary and sentence structure, using linking words to organize your ideas.

Ejemplo: Having graduated as a general dentist, I plan to enhance my skills by preparing for the NEET MDS exam. I aim to specialize further in the dental field and am very excited about this new phase of my career.

× I have recently graduated from US every simply graduated from high school so I am working.

✓ I have recently graduated from the US and simply graduated from high school, so I am working.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'US' which is necessary. Also, the phrase 'every simply graduated' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'and simply graduated' to connect the ideas properly.

× So I'm looking for a full time job right now.

✓ So I'm looking for a full-time job right now.

The phrase 'full time' should be hyphenated as 'full-time' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× But yes I am working as a part time at a dental clinic, as a dental assistant in healthcare and as a dental assistant.

✓ But yes, I am working part-time at a dental clinic as a dental assistant in healthcare.

The phrase 'as a part time' is incorrect; it should be 'part-time' without 'a' when used as an adverb. Also, 'as a dental assistant' is repeated unnecessarily.

× I have I have completed my study.

✓ I have completed my studies.

The repetition of 'I have' is an error. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to the course of education completed.

× I have recently graduated and the name of my college was MMCD is our.

✓ I have recently graduated and the name of my college was MMCD.

The phrase 'MMCD is our' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence should end after stating the college name. Also, 'the name of my college was MMCD' is correct.

× It wasn't until college and it was a very it was a dental college.

✓ It was a dental college.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Simplifying to 'It was a dental college' makes it clear and grammatically correct.

× It was a dental college and it was one of the best college rank colleges in India and it was a prestigious college.

✓ It was a dental college and one of the best-ranked colleges in India; it was a prestigious college.

The phrase 'best college rank colleges' is incorrect. It should be 'best-ranked colleges' to correctly describe the colleges.

× And it has.

✓ It has a good reputation.

The sentence 'And it has.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'a good reputation' completes the thought.

× Yes, definitely. I according to me, it, it is one of the best dental schools that have ever that that I have ever heard of, that I've ever heard of.

✓ Yes, definitely. According to me, it is one of the best dental schools that I have ever heard of.

The phrase 'I according to me' is incorrect; 'According to me' suffices. Also, the repetition 'that have ever that that I have ever heard of' is redundant and should be simplified.

× Yes, uh, although, although it was a wonderful experience to study at, at that college as there were some things which bother me a lot.

✓ Yes, although it was a wonderful experience to study at that college, there were some things that bothered me a lot.

The repetition of 'although' and 'at' is incorrect. Also, 'bother' should be in past tense 'bothered' to match the past experience.

× For example, the, for example, the quality of the food was not that much good.

✓ For example, the quality of the food was not very good.

The phrase 'not that much good' is incorrect; 'not very good' is the correct expression. Also, the repeated 'for example, the' is redundant.

× The food that was provided by the clean team was not nutritious and healthy.

✓ The food provided by the cleaning team was not nutritious or healthy.

'Clean team' is incorrect; it should be 'cleaning team'. Also, 'not nutritious and healthy' should be 'not nutritious or healthy' to correctly express the negative.

× So yes, that is one thing that I would like to change.

✓ So yes, that is one thing I would like to change.

The phrase 'that I would like to change' is correct but can be simplified by removing 'that' for smoother flow.

× As I have graduated as a journal dentist, I really want to enhance my qualities and Ann Mahan work and I'm really looking forward to to crack my need MD S paper an to do and to have a specialization in the dental field only.

✓ As I have graduated as a dental surgeon, I really want to enhance my skills and knowledge, and I'm really looking forward to cracking my NEET MDS exam and specializing in the dental field.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'journal dentist' should be 'dental surgeon'; 'Ann Mahan work' is unclear and replaced with 'skills and knowledge'; 'to to crack my need MD S paper an to do' is corrected to 'cracking my NEET MDS exam and specializing'; 'only' is unnecessary.

× So I'm looking forward to it and very excited for the new journey of my life.

✓ So I'm looking forward to it and am very excited for the new journey in my life.

The phrase 'excited for the new journey of my life' is better expressed as 'excited for the new journey in my life'. Also, adding 'am' before 'very excited' completes the sentence structure.