Study— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidato
I'm a student, my major is finance and my school is Nanjing University of Economics and Finance.
Examinador
Where do you study?
Candidato
My school, Nanjing University of Economics and Finance, is located in Nanjing, which is in the southeast of China.
Examinador
Is it a good place to study?
Candidato
Yes, my school is really a good place to study because the teachers here are kind and friendly, they are willing to help you with your academic study Was more the student union where organized some activities for the freshers to encounter to meet new friends.
Examinador
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Candidato
Good job! Improvement suggestions: 你的回答表达了想法，但句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多，影响了表达的流畅性和准确性。建议使用完整的句子，注意时态和主谓一致，同时增加细节和理由来支持你的观点。例如，可以说明为什么需要升级设施，或者为什么需要更多教学楼。这样可以使答案更丰富，更有说服力。此外，使用更多连接词和多样的词汇会让表达更自然。 Improved example: Yes, I would like my school to improve the facilities for students because the current ones are a bit old and not very comfortable.
Examinador
What are your future study plans?
Candidato
Yes, I want you go to American and have my intensive study about data science. Yes, I want to change my measure because I'm now more interested in the data science and the statistics.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 你的回答信息量较丰富，但句子结构较为简单且缺少连接词，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ejemplo: I am currently a student majoring in finance at Nanjing University of Economics and Finance.
Where do you study?
Puntuación: 85.0Sugerencia: 回答较完整且信息准确，但可以通过增加一些细节和使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ejemplo: I study at Nanjing University of Economics and Finance, which is located in Nanjing, a city in the southeast of China known for its rich history.
Is it a good place to study?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构混乱且有语法错误，建议使用完整且连贯的句子，注意语法和时态，同时增加具体细节支持观点。
Ejemplo: Yes, my school is a great place to study because the teachers are kind and always willing to help. Moreover, the student union organizes various activities for freshmen to meet new friends and feel welcomed.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 你的回答没有回应问题，建议直接回答并说明理由，使用完整句子表达你的想法。
Ejemplo: Yes, I would like my school to improve the library facilities because more comfortable study spaces would help students focus better.
What are your future study plans?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的句子结构，明确表达计划和原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: Yes, I plan to study in the United States to pursue intensive courses in data science because I have developed a strong interest in this field and statistics.
Gramática
× Yes, my school is really a good place to study because the teachers here are kind and friendly, they are willing to help you with your academic study Was more the student union where organized some activities for the freshers to encounter to meet new friends.
✓ Yes, my school is really a good place to study because the teachers here are kind and friendly. They are willing to help you with your academic study. Moreover, the student union organizes some activities for the freshers to meet new friends.
原句中存在句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，导致表达不清晰。应将长句拆分为多个完整句子，并使用合适的连接词（如Moreover）来连接句子，使表达更流畅和准确。
× Yes, I want you go to American and have my intensive study about data science.
✓ Yes, I want to go to America and have my intensive study about data science.
原句中“want you go”结构错误，正确用法是“want to go”，动词不定式前应加to。此外，“American”应改为“America”，表示国家名称。
× Yes, I want to change my measure because I'm now more interested in the data science and the statistics.
✓ Yes, I want to change my major because I'm now more interested in data science and statistics.
“measure”应为“major”，表示专业；“data science”和“statistics”作为学科名词通常不加冠词，且“the”不适用。应去掉“the”使表达更自然。
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