Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“with which is very famous”不自然，应改为“which is very famous”。同时，回答可以更简洁自然。

Ejemplo: I'm currently a student at Nankai University, which is very famous in China.

Sugerencia: 回答中“Changing province”应为“Changqing province”或正确地名，且“very great”表达不自然，建议用“very good”或“pleasant”。

Ejemplo: I study in Changqing province, which is located in northern China. The weather and natural environment there are very pleasant.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较好，但表达可更自然流畅，如“used for helping students to study better”可简化为“that help students study better”。

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because there are many convenient facilities, such as quiet coffee shops and study areas, and the people are very friendly to young students.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“there all always”应为“there is always”，句子较长且不够连贯，建议分句并使用连接词。

Ejemplo: I would like to see improvements in local transportation. Since it is a big city in northern China, there is always traffic congestion during busy times like mornings when people commute. Therefore, I think the city should develop its public transport system.

Sugerencia: 回答中“masters degree”应为“master's degree”，“LLC”可能是学校名称错误，应更准确。表达可以更自然。

Ejemplo: I plan to pursue my master's degree in finance at a well-known school in England called LSE.

× I'm currently a student and I study in Nankai University with which is very famous in China.

✓ I'm currently a student and I study at Nankai University, which is very famous in China.

句中使用了错误的连词“with”，应使用逗号引导定语从句“which is very famous in China”。此外，介词应为“at”而非“in”，因为通常说“study at a university”。

× I study in Changing province, which is located in the northern part of China.

✓ I study in Changqing Province, which is located in the northern part of China.

地名拼写错误，应为“Changqing Province”。此外，省份名称首字母应大写。

× The weather and natural environment there is very great.

✓ The weather and natural environment there are very good.

主语是复数“weather and natural environment”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“great”用来形容天气和环境不太合适，改为“good”更自然。

× there all always traffic congestion in some busy time like morning when people are going to work or study in other places.

✓ there is always traffic congestion at some busy times like mornings when people are going to work or study in other places.

“there all always”应为“there is always”，因为“traffic congestion”是不可数名词。时间表达应为复数“busy times”和“mornings”，介词应为“at”。

× I'm going to study my masters degree in LLC which is very well known school in England.

✓ I'm going to study my master's degree at LLC, which is a very well-known school in England.

“masters degree”应为“master's degree”，表示硕士学位。介词应为“at”表示在某学校学习。学校名称前应加冠词“a”，并且“well known”应连写为“well-known”。