School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer should directly state the location and current situation clearly, using correct grammar and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (where your school is), correct verb forms, and avoid unrelated information (like current job) unless asked. Use one or two supporting details and linking words if needed.

Ejemplo: I attended Dermatome Success School, which is located in the Silum area. It was a private high school about ten minutes from my home, so commuting was convenient.

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: give a topic sentence saying whether you liked your school, then add specific reasons and an example. Use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved my high school because the teachers were very supportive and I made many close friends. For example, one teacher stayed after class to help me with biology, which improved my grades.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons. Correct sentence structure and word choice (e.g., 'it gathers') are important. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas, and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Definitely. My high school was a good place to study because it had a rigorous entrance exam, so it attracted many motivated and talented students. Therefore, the study atmosphere was focused and challenging.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence describing the environment, then give specific examples. Use correct tenses and natural phrasing (e.g., 'studied' or 'study all the time'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons, and avoid grammatical errors.

Ejemplo: The environment was quite stressful because students were very competitive and often studied late into the night. For example, many classmates attended extra tutoring and spent weekends preparing for medical entrance exams.

Sugerencia: Answer directly about the importance of interest in studying: state your view, explain why, and give a brief example. Avoid vague phrasing and grammatical errors; use linking words like 'because', 'for example' and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: Interest in studying is very important because it motivates you to keep learning and improves long-term retention. For example, when I was interested in biology, I spent time reading extra materials and performed much better in exams.

× Currently I'm working as hospital but when I was in high school I went to Dermatome Success school which located in Silum area.

✓ Currently I'm working at a hospital, but when I was in high school I went to Dermatome Success School which is located in the Silum area.

Use of article and preposition: 'work as hospital' is incorrect; use 'work at a hospital' or 'work as a nurse/doctor'. Also proper nouns: capitalize 'School'. The clause 'which located' needs the auxiliary verb 'is' to form a relative clause. Add 'the' before area. Suggestion: use 'work at a hospital' and include appropriate verbs in relative clauses.

× Yes, I love my high school because I met many friends and teachers were also very nice.

✓ Yes, I love my high school because I met many friends and the teachers were also very nice.

Missing definite article before 'teachers' and slight sentence connection issue: add 'the' to refer to the specific teachers at the school. This also clarifies subject-verb relation. The verb 'were' is correct for past description of teachers.

× They dedicated to teach students and so I could.

✓ They were dedicated to teaching students, so I could learn a lot.

'Dedicated' requires 'be dedicated to + -ing' form. Replace 'to teach' with 'to teaching'. Also 'and so I could' is incomplete; specify what the student could do (e.g., 'learn a lot'). Use comma before 'so' when joining clauses.

× Definitely, my high school is very famous because the admission exams are very difficult, so they so it gather many intelligent students.

✓ Definitely, my high school is very famous because the admission exams are very difficult, so it gathers many intelligent students.

Confusing pronoun 'they' used for 'my high school'; use singular 'it'. Also remove extraneous words 'so it' repeated. Ensure subject 'school' agrees with verb 'gathers'.

× The environment is rather stressful because the students were very competitive.

✓ The environment is rather stressful because the students are very competitive.

Tense mismatch: describing the general environment should use present tense 'are' rather than past 'were'. Use present tense for habitual or current states.

× They are studying or all the time because they want to be doctors.

✓ They are studying all the time because they want to be doctors.

Typo and extraneous word 'or' should be removed. The phrase 'all the time' correctly follows 'studying'. Keep present continuous 'are studying' to show ongoing activity.

× Due to competitive students, studying is very important for us.

✓ Because of the competition among students, studying is very important for us.

'Due to competitive students' is an awkward prepositional phrase. Use 'because of the competition among students' or 'because students are competitive' to clarify cause. 'Due to' often follows a noun and 'competitive students' as subject is unclear.

× We have to learn whole day.

✓ We have to study the whole day.

Verb choice and article: 'learn whole day' is unnatural; native usage is 'study the whole day'. Add definite article 'the'. Use present tense 'have to' for obligation.

× Moreover, we have to take extra classes for gaining more.

✓ Moreover, we have to take extra classes to gain more knowledge.

'For gaining more' is awkward. Use 'to gain' (infinitive of purpose) and specify 'knowledge' or 'skills'. If using '-ing', restructure: 'for gaining more knowledge', but infinitive is more natural here.