Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer directly responds and gives a reason, which is good. To improve, make the sentence more natural and concise, avoid redundant phrases (e.g., “meet different beautiful views”), and add one brief specific example to enrich the response. Use a linking word if you add detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of interesting views because it helps me capture the moment and share it with friends and family. For example, I often photograph sunsets by the river and post them on social media because the colors are really striking.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows preference but has many hesitations and unclear words (e.g., “Lulu”), incomplete sentence and lack of specific detail. To improve, remove fillers (umm, MMM), state your preference clearly in one topic sentence, then add a linked specific reason and an example. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I find the natural scenery more peaceful and visually appealing. For instance, I love scenes of green fields and forests, and I particularly enjoy the fresh air when I go hiking in the countryside.

Sugerencia: You answered directly and gave a reason, but there are hesitations and an incomplete detail (“over thousands years of”). To improve, remove fillers, use correct grammar for age of buildings (e.g., “thousands of years old”), and add a short supporting detail or example to make the statement more specific.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country; I think China is incredibly beautiful. For example, many traditional buildings, some thousands of years old like temples and old towns, offer a unique sense of history and atmosphere.

× Yes, I like taking pictures when I meet different beautiful views because I want to capture the moment and share them to my friends and family members, especially on social media.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures when I see different beautiful views because I want to capture the moment and share them with my friends and family members, especially on social media.

The verb 'meet' is not used with 'views'; use 'see' for perceiving sights. The preposition 'to' is incorrect with 'share' in this context; the correct preposition is 'with' to indicate recipients. Suggestion: use 'see different beautiful views' and 'share them with my friends and family' to sound natural and grammatically correct.

× MMM of course Lulu areas because umm they are more beautiful and the nature I especially enjoy MMM the fresh air of rural area and the.

✓ Um, of course rural areas, because they are more beautiful and I especially enjoy the nature and the fresh air of rural areas.

The original sentence has broken structure, filler words, and missing/incorrect determiners. 'Lulu' appears to be a typo for 'rural'. 'The nature' is awkward; better 'I especially enjoy the nature and the fresh air of rural areas.' Also 'rural area' needs plural or an article. Suggestion: remove fillers, correct 'Lulu' to 'rural', ensure consistent number and articles (use 'rural areas' or 'the rural area').

× MMM I think China is the most beautiful country in the world. Umm we have many traditional buildings which are over thousands years of.

✓ I think China is one of the most beautiful countries in the world. We have many traditional buildings that are thousands of years old.

'The most beautiful' is acceptable but can be softened; correction also fixes the phrase 'over thousands years of' which is ungrammatical. Use 'thousands of years old' or 'over a thousand years old' depending on intended meaning. Also change 'which are' to 'that are' or keep 'which are' but complete the phrase. Suggestion: use 'thousands of years old' to express age and ensure plural agreement ('countries' if using 'one of the most').