Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense and word choice, avoid redundancy, and finish your thought. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say when and why you take photos, and what you do with them. Keep to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. If I see something interesting or beautiful, I usually take photos on the spot and post the best ones on my social media. For instance, when I find a colorful market stall or a pretty sunset, I take several shots and choose one to share because I enjoy capturing and remembering special moments.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise topic sentence and give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (plural/singular, articles). Mention concrete examples and explain why they appeal to you.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside offers a wider variety of natural scenes. For example, you can photograph fields, rivers and farm animals like horses, which create unique and peaceful images. As a result, I often find more creative opportunities for photography in rural areas.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and explain clearly with correct grammar: avoid awkward phrases like 'my in another countries' and unclear statements like 'I I sell a lot of good things.' Give a reason and a specific example that supports your opinion, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they feel fresher and more exciting than the scenes I see at home. For example, last week I visited my grandmother abroad and explored a rural area I had never seen before, which provided many new photo opportunities and memorable landscapes.

× Well it depends on the mood like if I sell something interesting or something that I like, I directly gain my phone and took a lot of pictures and post it on my story because I love beautiful things and it's helped me to change my.

✓ Well, it depends on my mood. If I see something interesting or something that I like, I immediately take out my phone, take a lot of pictures and post them on my story because I love beautiful things and they help me to change my mood.

Errors: mixed tenses (present and past: 'took' should be present 'take'), incorrect verb choice 'gain my phone' (should be 'take out my phone'), inconsistent pronouns and verbs ('post it' should match plural 'pictures' as 'post them'), sentence fragment at end 'change my.' should be 'change my mood'. Suggestion: Maintain present simple for habitual actions (see/take/post), use correct collocations ('take out my phone'), ensure pronoun agreement and complete the final noun 'mood'. Use commas to separate clauses.

× Well I enjoy taking pictures of both, but I prefer views in rural area because it has multiple views, several views.

✓ Well, I enjoy taking pictures of both, but I prefer views in rural areas because there are many different scenes to photograph.

Errors: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally; 'it has multiple views' is vague and uses singular pronoun 'it' incorrectly for plural ideas. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and 'there are' to introduce multiple items; replace 'views' repetition with clearer words like 'scenes'.

× You could take a a best the best picture ever.

✓ You could take the best picture ever.

Errors: doubled 'a a', incorrect article order 'a the', and redundant phrasing. Suggestion: Use a single definite article 'the' with superlatives: 'the best'.

× You would see animals, horses.

✓ You can see animals, such as horses.

Errors: modal verb 'would' is odd in this general descriptive context; better to use 'can' or present simple. Also 'animals, horses' should be clarified with 'such as' or 'like'. Suggestion: Use present simple or 'can' for general truths and include a linking phrase 'such as'.

× It was a wonderful experience.

✓ It was a wonderful experience.

This sentence is correct. It properly uses past tense to describe a past experience; no change needed.

× Well, I prefer views in my in another countries because the views in my country, I saw it multiple times, so I felt it gives a sense of boring.

✓ Well, I prefer views in other countries because I have seen the views in my country many times, so they feel boring to me.

Errors: 'in my in another countries' is ungrammatical; use 'in other countries'. 'the views in my country, I saw it multiple times' mixes clauses and uses incorrect pronoun 'it' for plural 'views'. 'gives a sense of boring' is incorrect; use 'feel boring' or 'are boring'. Suggestion: Use 'have seen' for experiences up to now, maintain plural agreement ('views' -> 'they'), and use adjectives properly ('boring' rather than 'boring' after 'sense of').

× For example, last week I went to my grandmother in another country.

✓ For example, last week I went to visit my grandmother in another country.

Error: sentence is mostly correct but can be improved by adding 'visit' to clarify purpose. Tense 'went' is correct for a completed past action. Suggestion: Include the verb 'visit' to make the action clearer.

× It was in rural area.

✓ It was in a rural area.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'rural area'. Suggestion: Use 'a rural area' to refer to a single area; if speaking generally use 'rural areas'.

× I I sell a lot of good things.

✓ I saw a lot of good things.

Errors: repetition 'I I', incorrect verb 'sell' instead of likely 'saw' or 'saw many good things', and tense should be past 'saw' to match 'last week'. Suggestion: Use the correct verb for observation ('saw') and remove duplicate words.