Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise, correct grammar, and add one specific example. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and limit to about three sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to clarify your reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photographs help me remember places and feelings. For example, when I visited the seaside last year I photographed the sunset to remind me of the colours and atmosphere. It’s a simple but pleasurable way to preserve memories.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words (umm) and finish your sentence clearly. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words such as “because” and “for example.” Keep to three sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are less affected by noise and crowds. For example, I enjoy walking in the countryside where I can hear birds and see wide open fields, which feels more peaceful. This makes the experience more relaxing and immersive.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer topic sentence and a concise reason; avoid wordy or repetitive phrasing. You can add a specific example or brief contrast using linking words like “however” or “for instance.” Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: I don’t have a strong preference because every country has attractive views worth photographing. For instance, I enjoy coastal scenery at home as well as mountain views when I travel, so I focus on the scene rather than the country. This way I always find interesting subjects to photograph.

× Yes, taking picture of different views can help you remember things from where when you experience them and that is a very pleasurable act.

✓ Yes, taking pictures of different views can help you remember where you experienced them, and that is a very pleasurable activity.

Errors: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (count noun with plural) and matches general activity; 'from where when you experience them' is ungrammatical and confused word order — correct phrase is 'where you experienced them'; 'act' is grammatical but 'activity' is more natural. Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally ('pictures'), place adverbial clauses in the correct order ('where you experienced them'), and prefer natural collocations ('pleasurable activity').

× Rural areas because they are umm, more untouched by the population and the umm noises, they are much better because you can experience things purely rather than just.

✓ Rural areas, because they are less affected by people and noise; they are much better because you can experience things more purely.

Errors: 'more untouched by the population' is awkward — use 'less affected by people' (comparative of degree). 'the umm noises' should be 'noise' (uncountable), not plural with 'the'. The trailing 'rather than just' is incomplete and unclear; replace with 'more purely' to complete the comparison. Suggestion: use appropriate comparatives ('less affected') and correct uncountable nouns ('noise'), and ensure comparisons are completed with a clear standard ('more purely' instead of 'rather than just').

× That actually does not really concern me because in every place in the world you can find somewhere that you can take picture of and you can enjoy the views and that is not necessarily put in a certain country like mine.

✓ That does not really concern me, because in every part of the world you can find places where you can take pictures and enjoy the views; they are not necessarily limited to a country like mine.

Errors: 'every place in the world' is acceptable but 'every part of the world' is more natural. 'somewhere that you can take picture of' uses awkward structure and ends with a preposition; correct to 'places where you can take pictures'. 'that is not necessarily put in a certain country like mine' is ungrammatical: use 'they are not necessarily limited to a country like mine' to refer back to 'places' or 'views'. Suggestion: use 'where' to introduce relative clauses for places, pluralise countable nouns ('pictures'), and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents ('they' referring to plural 'places' or 'views').