Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), remove repetition, and add one specific reason or example using a linking word. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because nature helps me relax and recharge. For example, I often photograph lakes and mountains when I go hiking, which makes me feel calm and more energetic for the rest of the day.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct pronouns and plural forms. Give a clear reason and one specific detail, connected with a linking word. Avoid vague repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer open fields and traditional farming scenes. For example, I like watching farmers working in rice paddies, which feels peaceful compared with busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, fix grammar (articles, plurals), and explain why with a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make it coherent and stay within sentence limit.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because travelling lets me see landscapes and cultures I haven't experienced before. For example, visiting Japan allowed me to photograph traditional gardens and mountain temples that are very different from the scenery at home.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views because I love to enjoy nature's view that that keep me calm and more energetic in my all day.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy nature's views that keep me calm and make me more energetic throughout my day.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (singular/plural mismatch). 'enjoy to' is incorrect; use 'enjoy' + noun or 'like to enjoy' but here 'enjoy nature's views' is natural. 'nature's view' -> 'nature's views' to match plural. Duplicate word 'that that' remove one. 'keep me calm and more energetic in my all day' is ungrammatical: use 'keep me calm and make me more energetic throughout my day'. Suggestions: match singular/plural, use correct verb collocations (enjoy + noun), remove duplicate words, and use natural time expressions like 'throughout my day'.

× I prefer you in rural areas because in rural areas we can see field, a farmer is farming and so on. Different, different things.

✓ I prefer rural areas because we can see fields, farmers working, and many other things.

Errors: 'I prefer you in rural areas' uses wrong pronoun 'you' instead of nothing or 'them'; correct is 'I prefer rural areas'. 'field' should be plural 'fields' to match general statement. 'a farmer is farming' is awkward; use 'farmers working' to describe typical scenes. 'Different, different things' is redundant; use 'many other things'. Suggestions: remove incorrect pronouns, pluralize general nouns, use concise natural phrases and avoid repetition.

× I prefer view in other countries because we can explore new country also and view and different kind of view totally different other our country and other country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because we can explore new countries and see completely different kinds of scenery compared to our country.

Errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. 'new country' should be plural 'new countries' to match general preference. 'different kind of view' should be 'different kinds of scenery' (plural agreement and more natural vocabulary). 'totally different other our country and other country' is ungrammatical and redundant; rephrase as 'completely different ... compared to our country'. Suggestions: use plural forms for general statements, choose appropriate nouns (scenery instead of repeated 'view'), and use clear comparative phrases like 'compared to our country'.