Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and relevant with clear enthusiasm, but it is slightly long and somewhat repetitive. Make the response more concise by starting with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., ‘photography’ instead of repeating ‘taking pictures’).

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. For example, I often shoot sunsets and lakes because the warm colours and reflections calm me, especially when I’m stressed. This hobby really brightens my mood and helps me relax.

Sugerencia: The answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but contains grammatical errors, some redundancy, and an incomplete ending. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct articles and plurals, and connect reasons with linking words. Be specific about what you like in rural views.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside offers peace and greenery. For instance, wide fields, old trees and quiet streams create calm compositions for my photos, whereas cities often feel crowded and noisy.

Sugerencia: Good personal preference and an example are given, but there are grammar mistakes and word-choice issues (e.g., ‘passionate of’ → ‘passionate about’, verb agreement). Make the answer more concise and add a specific detail about why Kashmir appeals to you (landscape features) using a linking phrase.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country, mainly because familiar places like Kashmir offer dramatic mountains, lakes and valleys. For example, the snow-capped peaks and mirror-like Dal Lake create striking images that draw visitors and photographers alike.

× Well, I'm absolutely passionate about taking pictures of different views.

✓ Well, I'm absolutely passionate about taking pictures of different views.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses present continuous 'I'm' with the adjective 'passionate' and gerund 'taking'. Keep as is.

× For example, I often take pictures of nature, sky, water and sunset views, which give me a feeling of happiness and also uplift my mood whenever I feel bored or sad.

✓ For example, I often take pictures of nature, the sky, water, and sunsets, which give me a feeling of happiness and uplift my mood whenever I feel bored or sad.

Added definite article 'the' before 'sky' and pluralized 'sunset' to 'sunsets' for parallelism and natural phrasing. Removed redundant 'also'. These changes improve noun parallelism and natural collocation in present habitual context.

× Well, I am quite fond of taking photographs of views of a countryside areas because rural areas is a perfect escape from hustle and bustle of city life.

✓ Well, I am quite fond of taking photographs of the countryside because rural areas are a perfect escape from the hustle and bustle of city life.

Changed 'a countryside areas' to 'the countryside' because 'countryside' is uncountable here and needs the definite article for specificity; changed 'rural areas is' to 'rural areas are' to match plural subject with plural verb (subject-verb agreement). Added 'the' before 'hustle and bustle' as the fixed expression requires the definite article.

× The lush greenery and peaceful environment is present in remote areas and there is more nature views in rural areas as compared to.

✓ The lush greenery and peaceful environment are present in remote areas, and there are more natural views in rural areas compared to urban ones.

Changed 'is' to 'are' to agree with compound subject 'The lush greenery and peaceful environment' (plural). Replaced 'more nature views' with 'more natural views' (adjective form) and completed the comparison by adding 'compared to urban ones' for clarity and grammatical completeness.

× Well, I'm absolutely passionate of taking the pictures of views in my own country.

✓ Well, I'm absolutely passionate about taking pictures of views in my own country.

Use 'passionate about' not 'passionate of'. Removed the unnecessary article 'the' before 'pictures' because general plural nouns do not need an article here.

× For example, Kashmir present in my country India is a beautiful land which have a fascinating view of nature and attracts all people from all over the world towards beauty of Kashmir.

✓ For example, Kashmir, in my country India, is a beautiful region that has fascinating natural scenery and attracts people from all over the world to its beauty.

Inserted commas for clarity and changed 'land' to 'region' for natural collocation. Changed 'present in' to 'in' for concision. Corrected 'which have' to 'that has' to match singular noun 'Kashmir' (subject-verb agreement). Replaced 'a fascinating view of nature' with 'fascinating natural scenery' for natural expression. Rephrased 'attracts all people from all over the world towards beauty of Kashmir' to 'attracts people from all over the world to its beauty' for grammatical correctness and idiomatic phrasing.