Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid hesitation sounds (e.g., "uh"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Use correct grammar (e.g., "especially" not "specially"; "places I have not been to").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit a new city, I photograph landmarks and street scenes to remember the trip, and I save the best shots in a dedicated album.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference (or say you like both) and then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers ("umm") and correct grammar (e.g., "architecture in every city"; "rural areas have different kinds of views"). Keep to two to three sentences.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views, but if I had to choose I prefer rural scenes because they offer peaceful landscapes and natural light. In contrast, urban areas interest me for their striking architecture and colourful street life.

Sugerencia: Give a straightforward answer then explain with specific reasons and examples. Avoid vague statements like "we should love our own"—instead say why you prefer home views (familiarity, nostalgia) and acknowledge positives of foreign views with a linking word (e.g., "however").

Ejemplo: I generally prefer views in my own country because familiar places bring back memories and I understand the local history. However, I also enjoy views abroad because they expose me to different architectural styles and cultural details that I find inspiring.

× Definitely yes. I like to take pictures of different views, specially if I am going to uh, different locations that I have not been into.

✓ Definitely yes. I like to take pictures of different views, especially when I go to places I have not been to.

Errors: 'specially' should be 'especially' (wrong word form). 'when I go to' is more natural than 'if I am going to'. 'different locations that I have not been into' is wordy and uses incorrect preposition 'into' with 'been'; use 'places I have not been to'. Suggestion: use 'especially when I go to places I have not been to' for clarity and correct preposition use.

× In fact, I always save the photos I took when I go to a different places.

✓ In fact, I always save the photos I take when I go to different places.

Errors: 'a different places' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use plural 'different places'. Tense mismatch: 'photos I took when I go' should be consistent present habitual: use 'photos I take when I go'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions: 'I always save the photos I take when I go to different places.'

× I prefer views for both or one areas in rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in both urban and rural areas.

Errors: 'for both or one areas in rural areas' is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions/articles. Use 'in both urban and rural areas' to contrast two categories. Suggestion: be concise and parallel when comparing categories: 'in both urban and rural areas.'

× So for example for urban areas UMM they have different UMM architecture or buildings, the design of the buildings for every cities.

✓ For example, urban areas have different architecture and building designs in every city.

Errors: redundant filler 'UMM', awkward word order 'they have different UMM architecture or buildings, the design of the buildings for every cities.' Also 'every cities' is incorrect plural. Correction simplifies and fixes agreement: 'architecture and building designs in every city.' Suggestion: remove filler words, combine related nouns, and ensure noun-number agreement.

× For the rural areas they have different also kind of views.

✓ Rural areas also have different kinds of views.

Errors: awkward pronoun placement and word order: 'For the rural areas they have different also kind of views.' Use 'Rural areas also have different kinds of views.' Also 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' to match 'different'. Suggestion: place adverb 'also' directly before verb or after subject and pluralize 'kinds'.

× I prefer views in my own country. We should love our own.

✓ I prefer views in my own country. We should love our own country.

Errors: 'We should love our own' omits the noun 'country' and is vague. Add 'country' for clarity. Suggestion: always include the object when using 'our own' to avoid ambiguity: 'our own country.'

× But when you go to different countries, it's not bad or it's a good thing that you also appreciate the views and the culture of other countries, their design, their culture.

✓ But when you go to different countries, it's good to appreciate their views, design, and culture.

Errors: wordy and awkward phrasing 'it's not bad or it's a good thing that you also appreciate...' Simplify and use present general truth: 'it's good to appreciate their views, design, and culture.' Also avoid repeating 'their culture' after 'culture'. Suggestion: be concise and use parallel list items: 'views, design, and culture.'