Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to add a brief reason and an example. Also choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "scenery" instead of "mother's views"). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I'm not a big fan of photography, so I don't take many photos. However, if I see particularly beautiful scenery, I will photograph it to keep the memory — for example, sunsets or mountain views when I travel.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with concise, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Correct vocabulary (e.g., "multinational companies", "crowded streets") and grammar (subject-verb agreement) are needed. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cities have diverse architecture and busy streets. For example, I enjoy watching tall buildings and multinational companies, and seeing people commuting gives the city a lively atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly, avoid unclear phrases and unrelated details. Use correct tense and precise vocabulary (e.g., "I prefer views abroad because they feel exotic"). Give one brief reason and one concrete example. Keep to 2–4 coherent sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they feel more exotic and different from what I'm used to. For instance, I would love to see the skyline of Shanghai or the busy markets in Mumbai because those scenes are unfamiliar and exciting to me.

× So for me it's that I'm not a huge fan of the photography, so I didn't take a lot of picture in my life.

✓ For me, I'm not a huge fan of photography, so I haven't taken a lot of pictures in my life.

Use 'photography' without 'the' (uncountable noun) and plural 'pictures'. Use present perfect 'haven't taken' to describe life experience up to now. Also move comma placement: 'For me, ...'. Suggestions: remove 'the' before uncountable nouns like 'photography', change 'picture' to plural 'pictures', and use present perfect for unspecified times in life.

× But if something is really pretty good, like the mother's views, this kind of things, I will take the photos because I think that is so beautiful that I can get the memory.

✓ But if something is really pretty, like a mother's view or scenes like that, I will take photos because I think they are so beautiful and I can keep the memory.

Replace awkward 'pretty good' with 'pretty' and correct 'the mother's views' to 'a mother's view' or 'scenes like that'. 'This kind of things' -> 'scenes like that'. Use 'photos' plural without 'the'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to photos and 'keep the memory' or 'preserve memories'. Suggestions: simplify expressions, use correct noun forms and matching pronouns.

× For me that I prefer to have some views in the urban areas because you know that in the urban areas there are lots of the different kinds of the buildings and lots of across national companies here and there.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because there are many different kinds of buildings and many multinational companies here and there.

Remove redundant words 'for me that I' and 'the' before plural nouns. Use 'many' not 'lots of the'. 'Across national companies' is incorrect; use 'multinational companies'. Suggestions: simplify subject phrase to 'I prefer', remove unnecessary articles, and use correct compound adjective 'multinational'.

× So I think that this country review is so huge and we can see the crowded people to work to another places every time.

✓ So I think the city view is vast, and we can see crowds of people commuting to other places all the time.

'Country review' is incorrect—likely 'city view'. 'Is so huge' -> 'is vast' or 'is large'. 'Crowded people' -> 'crowds of people'. 'To work to another places every time' -> 'commuting to other places all the time'. Fix subject-verb agreement and noun phrases. Suggestions: choose correct nouns ('city' vs 'country'), use 'crowds' and 'commuting'.

× For me, I prefer the view in another country because I'm predicting Shanghai.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because I'm planning to visit Shanghai.

'Predicting Shanghai' is incorrect; likely 'planning to visit Shanghai'. Use plural 'views in other countries'. 'Prefer' + noun is acceptable; adjust verb 'planning' (present continuous) for future intention. Suggestions: use 'planning to visit' for intended travel and 'other countries' plural.

× That's lots of things.

✓ There are lots of things to see there.

Original fragment lacks clear subject-verb structure. Use 'There are' to introduce existence and add 'to see there' to clarify meaning. Suggestions: form full sentences with subject and verb, e.g., 'There are many things to see.'

× I will you see maybe 17 years.

✓ I think I will see it in maybe 17 years.

Original word order and meaning are unclear. Likely intended 'I will see it in maybe 17 years' or 'I think I will visit in 17 years'. Fix pronoun placement and include verb properly. Suggestions: use subject + auxiliary + verb + time phrase.

× So if I can see the different views in other country like Mumbai, Shanghai, Hong Kong, this kind of things.

✓ So if I can see different views in other countries like Mumbai, Shanghai, or Hong Kong,

Use plural 'countries' and 'different views' without 'the'. Add commas and 'or' before last item. Remove 'this kind of things' and finish sentence properly. Suggestions: use parallel list structure and correct plurality.

× I think I prefer this kind of views because that is the strangest for me.

✓ I think I prefer these kinds of views because they are the most unusual to me.

Change 'this kind of views' to 'these kinds of views' or 'this kind of view' for agreement. 'That is the strangest' should be 'they are the most unusual' to match plural 'views'. Use appropriate comparative/superlative form 'most unusual'. Suggestions: ensure noun-adjective agreement and match number between subject and verb.