Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Используйте правильную лексику и проверяйте слова на предмет опечаток; строьте более связные и короткие предложения (не более 3–5 предложений). Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных поддерживающих предложения с логическими связками. Избегайте слов-ошибок («deals», «precious») и ненужных вводных («say").

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me relax and forget about daily stress. For example, last winter at a mountain resort I took photos of snowy peaks and pine forests, which really lifted my mood.

Sugerencia: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и лишние слова; делайте ответ прямым и давайте конкретные причины с живыми деталями. Свяжите предложения словами (because, so, for example). Избегайте бессмысленных фраз (например, «misled in a striking Martinez landscape").

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have picturesque mountains and snow-covered peaks. For example, the landscapes in the Caucasus are dramatic and peaceful, so I enjoy photographing quiet valleys and traditional villages rather than busy streets.

Sugerencia: Уберите бессмысленные или искажённые фразы («UH Wally's») и используйте точные названия или обобщения; начните с прямого ответа, затем приведите личную причину и пример. Поддерживайте связность с помощью слов-направляющих (because, moreover, for example).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I grew up among those mountains and they bring back childhood memories. Moreover, the local parks and scenic areas offer peaceful spots for photography and relaxation.

× I really enjoyed taking pictures of different deals because it helps me reduce stress and escape from daily precious.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of different places because it helps me reduce stress and escape from daily pressures.

The student used incorrect words: 'enjoyed' (past) conflicts with 'helps' (present) and 'deals'/'precious' are wrong word choices. Change 'enjoyed' to present 'enjoy' to match the habitual meaning expressed by 'helps'. Replace 'deals' with 'places' and 'precious' with 'pressures' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: use consistent tense for habitual actions (simple present) and choose appropriate nouns.

× For example, last winter when I was in a beautiful mountain resort, say, I always photographed everything I saw.

✓ For example, last winter when I was at a beautiful mountain resort, I photographed everything I saw.

The adverb 'always' with a specific time frame 'last winter' is awkward; use simple past 'photographed' without 'always' or place 'always' for habitual past (but here a single event is described). 'In a resort' is less natural than 'at a resort'. Suggestion: match time expressions with past tense and avoid habitual adverbs when describing a single past visit.

× Undoubtedly, I prefer the use of rural areas because we have a picturesque mountains and snow covered peaks that misled in a striking Martinez landscape that showcases the natural beauty of the Caucasus region.

✓ Undoubtedly, I prefer rural areas because we have picturesque mountains and snow-covered peaks that meld into a striking mountainous landscape showcasing the natural beauty of the Caucasus region.

Multiple article and adjective errors: 'the use of rural areas' is incorrect — omit 'the use of'. 'a picturesque mountains' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use plural 'picturesque mountains'. 'snow covered' should be hyphenated 'snow-covered' when used before a noun. 'misled' is wrong verb; likely 'meld' or 'merge' is intended. 'Martinez' seems incorrect—replace with 'mountainous'. Suggestion: ensure articles agree with noun number, hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns, and choose correct verbs to express merging landscapes.

× That's why I prefer rural areas.

✓ That's why I prefer rural areas.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition error. No change needed.

× Undoubtedly, I prefer those in my country because I grew up there and these mountains and peaks remind me of my childhood.

✓ Undoubtedly, I prefer the views in my country because I grew up there and the mountains and peaks remind me of my childhood.

Replace vague pronoun 'those' with 'the views' for clarity. 'These' is acceptable but 'the' is more natural when referring to known features in context. Suggestion: use specific noun after demonstrative pronouns to avoid ambiguity.

× What's more, our beautiful UH Wally's and parks provide a peaceful escape from daily pressures.

✓ What's more, our beautiful hills and parks provide a peaceful escape from daily pressures.

'UH Wally's' appears to be a nonsensical term—likely 'hills' or 'valleys'; choose the appropriate noun. Also avoid possessive form 'Wally's' when referring to plural places. Suggestion: use accurate place names or common nouns like 'hills' or 'valleys' to convey meaning clearly.