Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering yes/no, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid irrelevant words like “I am photogenic” unless you explain it. Use simpler verbs (take/take photos) and correct articles/prepositions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph natural scenes such as forests and sunsets because their colors and patterns mesmerize me. I also try to capture interesting environmental details to show how nature changes across seasons.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or say you like both, then contrast them with linking words (however, while). Use plural/singular correctly and more natural verbs (I prefer photographing / I like photographing). Provide one specific example for each to be more concrete.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views, but for different reasons. In urban areas, I prefer photographing buildings and architectural details because of their shapes and textures. In contrast, rural areas attract me with landscapes like rolling hills and rivers, which are great for wide panoramic shots.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid unclear phrases. State whether you prefer your country or abroad or both, then give a clear reason and a concrete example. Use correct grammar (I had a chance to visit London; my country has many different landscapes). Avoid odd idioms like “love both of the eggs.”

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad. For instance, I visited London last year and loved photographing its historic streets and riverside views. At home, I appreciate the diverse scenery and cultural settings that offer many unique photo opportunities.

× Well, I am photogenic, I love to click the different kind of picture specially the nature views and all segments related to the our environment and which mesmerize me a lot.

✓ Well, I am photogenic; I love to take different kinds of pictures, especially nature views and all aspects related to our environment that mesmerize me a lot.

Errors: 'click' is informal and not correct for taking photos (verb choice), 'the different kind of picture' has number and article errors and wrong adjective order, 'specially' should be 'especially', 'the our' uses both definite article and pronoun, and the relative clause 'which mesmerize me a lot' needs to refer to 'aspects' or 'views'. Suggestions: use 'take' or 'photograph', make nouns plural when general ('different kinds of pictures'), remove extra articles ('our environment'), use 'especially' and connect the clause to the correct noun ('aspects that mesmerize me').

× Well, I like both views, especially urban areas and rural areas.

✓ Well, I like both, especially urban and rural areas.

Redundant use of 'views' and plural nouns: saying 'both views' then 'areas' is awkward. Use 'both' alone with 'areas' or repeat 'urban and rural areas'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I like both, especially urban and rural areas.'

× In urban areas I usually like to click the pictures and the views of the buildings and architecture and in rural area I can visit the different kind of landscapes and the nature view.

✓ In urban areas I usually like to take pictures of buildings and architecture, and in rural areas I can visit different kinds of landscapes and natural scenery.

Problems: 'click' is wrong verb for photos; article and number issues ('the views', 'in rural area', 'different kind of landscapes', 'the nature view'); 'nature view' is unnatural — use 'natural scenery'. Suggestions: use 'take pictures', pluralize 'areas' and 'kinds', remove unnecessary articles, and use 'natural scenery' or 'nature views'.

× Well, I got a chance to visit in foreign place which was the London.

✓ Well, I got a chance to visit a foreign place, which was London.

Error: unnecessary preposition 'in' after 'visit' and incorrect article 'the London'. Use 'visit a place' and proper noun 'London' without 'the'. Suggestion: use 'visit a foreign place' and appositive 'which was London.'

× And in my country is also there are different kind of the culture and there are many different kind of the sceneries.

✓ And in my country there are also different kinds of cultures and many different kinds of scenery.

Errors: word order and extra 'is', 'different kind' should be 'different kinds', 'the culture' and 'the sceneries' incorrect articles and pluralization; 'scenery' is usually uncountable. Suggestions: reorder to 'there are also different kinds of cultures' and use 'kinds of scenery' or 'varied scenery'.

× So where I can go and where I can enjoy that and mostly I love both of the eggs.

✓ So I can go there and enjoy them, and overall I like both options.

Errors: incorrect word order for questions vs statements ('where I can go' should be 'I can go there'), vague pronoun 'that' unclear, and the phrase 'love both of the eggs' is nonsensical and likely a wrong word choice. Suggestions: clarify meaning: if referring to domestic and foreign places, say 'I can go there and enjoy them' and 'I like both options.'