Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak with correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific supporting points using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and incorrect phrases like 'shop distance'—say 'short distance' or 'from close up.' Be more precise: explain what you capture close up (expressions) and from far away (landscape and context).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because close-up shots capture people’s expressions and personality, while long-distance shots show the landscape and how people interact with their environment. For example, a close portrait can reveal emotion, whereas a wide shot can show a market scene with surrounding buildings.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Reduce repetition and filler words. Use correct collocations: say 'rural areas' or 'natural scenery' rather than 'nature scenery' and avoid 'it's a nature.' Link reason and example with words like 'because' and 'for example.'

Ejemplo: I prefer taking photos in rural areas because I like natural scenery and quiet landscapes. For example, I often photograph fields and rivers at sunrise, which creates soft light and interesting reflections.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and then compare with clear, grammatical sentences. Use linking phrases like 'on the other hand' to contrast. Correct subject-verb agreement ('old buildings are') and avoid repeating phrases. Be specific about what appeals to you in each place (architecture styles, details, atmosphere).

Ejemplo: I like both. In my country I prefer photographing historic buildings and temples because they have ornate details and cultural meaning. On the other hand, in other countries I often photograph modern architecture and cityscapes to capture sleek lines and contemporary design.

× If you taking photos from the shop distance, you can uh, take the people's personal personality.

✓ If you take photos from a short distance, you can capture people's personal expressions.

The original uses 'taking' incorrectly after 'If you'; a simple present 'take' is required for first conditional/real general situations. Also 'shop distance' is unclear—'short distance' fits intent—and 'personal personality' is awkward; 'personal expressions' or 'facial expressions' is appropriate. Suggestion: Use the base verb after 'If you' for general conditional statements and choose precise nouns.

× If you taking photos from the long distance, you can see the, uh, scenery and people is, uh, I think it's like.

✓ If you take photos from a long distance, you can see the scenery and people, I think.

Again the clause should use base verb 'take' after 'If you'. The phrase 'people is' is ungrammatical (subject-verb agreement); 'people' requires the plural verb 'are' or be omitted as in the corrected sentence. Remove filler words for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'take' after 'If you' and ensure subject-verb agreement (people + plural verb) or rephrase to avoid the verb.

× I prefer taking photos about rural areas.

✓ I prefer taking photos of rural areas.

Use 'of' (not 'about') when referring to the subject of a photo: 'photos of X'. 'About' suggests the photos concern a topic rather than depict it. Suggestion: Use 'photos of' to indicate what the picture shows.

× This is because I prefer the the nature scenery.

✓ This is because I prefer natural scenery.

'The the' is a repetition error and 'nature scenery' is awkward; the adjective 'natural' correctly modifies 'scenery'. Definite article 'the' is not necessary here. Suggestion: Use 'natural scenery' and avoid repeating articles.

× Uh uh, this is not man made, it's a nature.

✓ Uh, this is not man-made; it's natural.

'Man made' should be hyphenated as 'man-made' when used as an adjective. 'It's a nature' is incorrect because 'nature' is an uncountable noun here; use 'it's natural' or 'it's part of nature'. Suggestion: Use 'man-made' and prefer 'natural' to describe something not created by humans.

× In my country, old buildings is very famous.

✓ In my country, old buildings are very famous.

'Old buildings' is plural, so the verb must be plural: 'are' instead of 'is'. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree in number with plural subjects.

× So in China I will photograph in the old buildings and temples and in the other country maybe the modern type buildings is very is very famous, Uh.

✓ So in China I will photograph old buildings and temples, and in other countries maybe modern-style buildings are very famous.

Use no preposition 'in' before 'old buildings' when meaning 'photograph [something]'; say 'photograph old buildings'. 'The other country' is too specific; 'other countries' matches general contrast. 'Modern type buildings' is better as 'modern-style buildings'. Also correct subject-verb agreement: 'buildings are', and remove redundant 'is very is very'. Suggestion: Use 'photograph [object]' without 'in', use 'other countries' for generality, and ensure verb agreement; prefer 'modern-style' for clarity.