Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it can be improved by using a stronger topic sentence, varying vocabulary, and adding one brief, specific reason with a linking word. Avoid redundancy ("different views or different angle"). Keep within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer to enjoy a view directly rather than photograph it because taking pictures can distract me from the experience. For example, when I visit a mountain or a beach I like to soak in the atmosphere and sounds instead of spending time framing shots.

Sugerencia: Good structure: direct topic sentence and supporting details. Improve by tightening language, correcting grammar ("fresh air" not "fresh air" plural), and using a linking word to connect contrast. Add one specific example to make it more vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have more greenery, cleaner air and open space. For instance, I enjoy walking in the countryside where it's quiet and I can relax, whereas cities are often noisy and crowded, which makes walking less pleasant.

Sugerencia: You answer the question and give examples, but improve grammatical accuracy ("different countries", "between my country, the Philippines, and the places I visit"). Use a concise topic sentence, link your examples with a reason, and avoid asking a question back to the examiner—give a brief personal comment instead.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy comparing landscapes and architecture. For example, European cities often have historic stone buildings, while Japanese gardens are carefully designed and tranquil, which is quite different from many urban scenes in the Philippines.

× No, I don't really like taking photos on different views or different angle because I find it a waste of time and I'm interested in seeing it and enjoying it in person.

✓ No, I don't really like taking photos of different views or from different angles because I find it a waste of time and I'm more interested in seeing them and enjoying them in person.

Use 'taking photos of' not 'on'. Use plural 'angles' with 'different'. Match pronouns and nouns: 'views' plural so use 'them' not 'it'. Also 'more interested' is natural for contrast. Suggestion: use 'of' for the object photographed, 'from' for perspective, pluralize when referring to more than one, and keep pronoun agreement.

× There are more trees, more greenery, there are fresh air and more space.

✓ There are more trees and more greenery, fresher air, and more space.

'Fresh air' is uncountable and should be described as 'fresher air' when comparing. Keep parallel structure with commas and conjunctions. Using comparative 'fresher' is correct when comparing rural to urban areas.

× Urban area is a little bit noisy and crowded and it's hard to relax and walk because of the people.

✓ Urban areas are a little noisy and crowded, and it's hard to relax or walk because of the crowds.

Use plural 'urban areas' to match general meaning; then plural verb 'are'. Replace 'the people' with 'crowds' or 'the crowds' for natural expression. Use 'or' for alternatives and simplify adjective phrase.

× I prefer views from different country because I want to see the difference between my country, the Philippines, to where I go.

✓ I prefer views from different countries because I want to see the differences between my country, the Philippines, and the places I visit.

Use plural 'countries' when speaking generally. 'Differences' plural fits comparing multiple aspects. Use 'places I visit' instead of 'where I go' for natural phrasing and use 'between ... and ...' for comparison.

× For example, the architecture in Europe, the gardens in Japan. What is the difference between them and my country?

✓ For example, the architecture in Europe and the gardens in Japan. What are the differences between them and those in my country?

Combine the examples into one sentence with 'and'. Use 'What are the differences' to match plural 'architecture and gardens' and ask about 'those in my country' for clear comparison. Ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel structure.