Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural, concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and incorrect phrases (e.g., "having a tool"). Use one or two supporting details and a linking phrase. Aim for 2–3 sentences, correct verb forms, and clearer vocabulary (e.g., "device" or "camera").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I usually use my smartphone to capture landscapes so I can remember the beautiful places I visit.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear preference or say you have no strong preference and give concise reasons. Remove fillers and repetitions. Use linking words like "however" or "because" to explain your choice, and give one specific example to support your point. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference because both urban and rural scenes can be beautiful. For example, I like photographing city skylines at night for their lighting, while I also enjoy rural fields for their peaceful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., "there are also" not "are also can"), and use precise vocabulary like "landscapes", "attractions", "cultures". Keep to 2–3 compact sentences and include a specific example of a scene you like at home and abroad.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each offers something different. For instance, in my country I love photographing historic temples, while abroad I enjoy capturing coastal landscapes and experiencing new cultural scenes.

× I'm fond of taking pictures of different views when I'm having a tool in different places to memorize the beautiful scenery I have seen.

✓ I'm fond of taking pictures of different views when I'm traveling to different places to remember the beautiful scenery I have seen.

The phrase 'having a tool in different places' is ungrammatical and likely a misuse of nouns/verbs. Replace with 'traveling to different places' which correctly uses the -ing form 'traveling' to indicate an ongoing activity. Also use 'remember' (simple verb) instead of 'memorize' for natural collocation with photos. Suggestion: use clear verbs that match meaning and collocate with 'taking pictures' (e.g., traveling, visiting).

× I think it doesn't matter whether it is viewed in urban areas or rural areas.

✓ I think it doesn't matter whether the views are in urban areas or rural areas.

The original uses passive 'is viewed' which is awkward and mismatches the plural noun 'views.' Change to active description 'the views are in' to match present-tense general statement and plural subject. Ensure subject-verb agreement for plural 'views' with 'are.'

× Actually, I prefer both of these views in my country and in other countries.

✓ Actually, I prefer both the views in my country and those in other countries.

The phrase 'both of these views' is unclear and 'these' with 'both' is awkward. Use 'both the views... and those...' to clearly refer to two groups. This fixes agreement and reference. Suggestion: use parallel structure when comparing two sets (both... and...).

× In my country there are a lot of beautiful sceneries and tourist attractions and in other countries are also can enjoy different views and experience different cultures.

✓ In my country there are a lot of beautiful scenes and tourist attractions, and in other countries you can also enjoy different views and experience different cultures.

Problems: 'sceneries' is usually 'scenes' or 'scenery' (uncountable); word order 'in other countries are also can enjoy' is incorrect. Correct by using 'you can also enjoy' to supply a subject and proper verb placement. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenes' for countable instances and include an explicit subject when using 'can.'

× I like, I prefer to take pictures, all of them and, uh, memorize them to to to to to keep.

✓ I like to take pictures of all of them and keep them to remember the scenes.

Redundant fillers and repeated words confuse meaning. 'All of them' needs a clear referent (the views) and 'keep them to remember' is more natural than 'memorize them to keep.' Remove stuttering and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: use concise phrasing: 'I like to take pictures of all of them and keep them to remember the scenes.'