Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh), correct verb forms, and add one specific detail to support your answer. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of beautiful views. For example, I often photograph dramatic sunsets and cloud formations because they change quickly and look very striking in photos.

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatically correct and slightly more specific. Start with a direct topic sentence, then provide a reason and a short example. Use linking words like because or for example to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because wide fields and open skies look more peaceful and photogenic. For example, I have many photos on my phone of fields at sunset with colorful clouds that create a calm atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use one clear topic sentence, mention the reason briefly, and give a concise personal example. Remove fillers and correct small grammar errors (e.g., 'make' → 'makes').

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad and I love India's peaceful rural landscapes. For instance, when I see a colorful sunset over a village field, I always take photos because it makes me feel happy.

× Yes, I love to take pictures of beautiful views as whenever I saw uh clouds, I take picture of sunset also.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of beautiful views, and whenever I see clouds, I take pictures of the sunset as well.

The sentence mixes verb forms and tenses. 'Love to take' is acceptable but 'love taking' is more natural; more importantly, 'whenever I saw' uses past tense while the habitual action requires present simple 'whenever I see'. 'Take picture' requires plural 'take pictures' to agree with general habit. Also add 'the' before 'sunset' and 'as well' for natural coordination. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and keep verbs in consistent form.

× As I personally prefer views are good in rural areas as there are many fields which give them aesthetic look.

✓ Personally, I prefer rural views because there are many fields that give them an aesthetic look.

The original has an incorrect structure 'prefer views are good' and plural/singular mismatch. 'Fields which give them aesthetic look' needs article 'an' before 'aesthetic look' and relative clause should use 'that' or 'which' with correct reference. Suggestion: use 'prefer rural views' and 'an aesthetic look' for grammatical correctness.

× I have lot of pictures in my mobile phone of fields with proper sunset and colorful clouds.

✓ I have a lot of pictures on my mobile phone of fields with beautiful sunsets and colorful clouds.

'Lot' needs the determiner 'a' ('a lot of'). Use 'on my mobile phone' rather than 'in'. 'Sunset' referring to many pictures should be plural 'sunsets'. Also 'proper sunset' is unnatural; 'beautiful sunsets' fits context. Suggestion: include articles and pluralize when referring to multiple items.

× Well, I have no experience of other countries as I haven't traveled to any other country.

✓ Well, I have no experience of other countries because I haven't traveled to any other country.

This sentence is mostly correct but the conjunction 'as' can be ambiguous; 'because' is clearer in spoken English. The tense 'haven't traveled' (present perfect) correctly indicates life experience. Suggestion: prefer 'because' for clarity.

× I live in India and the the environment of India is very peaceful especially in rural areas.

✓ I live in India, and the environment in India is very peaceful, especially in rural areas.

There is a duplicated 'the the' and 'environment of India' is acceptable but 'environment in India' is more natural. Commas improve readability. Suggestion: remove duplication and use natural prepositional phrase.

× Whenever I see beautiful sunset as well as uh colorful clouds, I take picture and it really make me happy.

✓ Whenever I see a beautiful sunset and colorful clouds, I take pictures and it really makes me happy.

'Beautiful sunset' needs an article 'a' for a singular event; because this is a habitual action, plural 'pictures' fits. 'Make' should agree with singular subject 'it' -> 'makes'. Also remove filler 'as well as uh' and replace with 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and appropriate articles for singular nouns.