Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct verb forms, and give one or two specific examples with linking words. Aim for 2–3 sentences under the 5-sentence limit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to new cities. For example, I often photograph mountains and green hills because I like capturing natural light and textures, and I also take cityscape shots to show the contrast between nature and urban life.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence then two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (singular/plural, tense) and reduce repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are more peaceful and full of greenery. For example, I enjoy photographing small ponds and rivers in the countryside, and I find rural settings less crowded and more relaxing than busy urban streets.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, concise preference statement and explain with specific, coherent reasons. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Mention one or two concrete examples (seasons, landscapes) and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because the scenery changes dramatically with the seasons. For example, in September and October we have a mix of rainy and sunny days that creates dramatic skies and lush landscapes, which I love to photograph.

× I like to taking pictures of different views, uh, especially when I travel in a different city, umm, I like to captures that umm, scenario view such as mountains, uh, green hills, city areas and everything.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to a different city; I like to capture scenes such as mountains, green hills, and city areas.

The verbs 'like to taking' and 'like to captures' are incorrect. After 'like' you can use either the infinitive (to + verb) or the -ing form, but not both together. Use 'I like taking' (verb + -ing) or 'I like to capture' (to + base verb). Also use the base form 'capture' (not 'captures') because the subject 'I' requires the base form after 'to'. Use 'travel to a different city' for correct preposition. Combine ideas clearly and remove filler words for fluency.

× Yes, I prefer rural area because it was more peaceful, quiet, full of greenery and small ponds, rivers, umm rather than in urban area, because urban area is not so quiet, so much crowd area. So I will choose.

✓ Yes, I prefer rural areas because they are more peaceful and quiet, full of greenery, with small ponds and rivers, rather than urban areas, which are crowded. So I would choose rural areas.

Countable nouns like 'area' need plural or an article: use 'rural areas' or 'a rural area'. The pronoun and verb must agree in number: 'they are' for plural. 'So much crowd area' is ungrammatical; use 'crowded' or 'which are crowded.' Use conditional/modal 'would' for preference. Also improve word order and remove fillers.

× Yes, I prefer my own country umm, because uh, every month has a different view from my country when I like it so much when it was September and October between them because it was so like rainy, cloudy, sunny, mixed up umm season.

✓ Yes, I prefer my own country, because each month has a different look, and I especially like September and October because the weather is mixed—rainy, cloudy and sunny.

Tense and time expression errors: use present simple 'has' for habitual facts ('each month has'). Avoid incorrect past tense 'was' when describing general characteristics. Clarify 'between them' and restructure to clearly state months and reasons. Use 'the weather is mixed' instead of 'it was so like rainy'. Remove fillers and simplify phrasing.

× ...I like to captures that umm, scenario view such as mountains, uh, green hills, city areas and everything.

✓ ...I like to capture those scenes, such as mountains, green hills and city areas.

The verb 'captures' is third person singular form but the subject in this clause is 'I' (first person), so the correct form after 'to' is the base verb 'capture'. Also use plural demonstrative 'those scenes' rather than 'that scenario view' for natural English.