Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and natural but could be improved by tightening the structure, avoiding minor grammar issues, and adding a brief specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Also correct small grammar: say “so I don’t forget” instead of “to not forget.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve memories so I don’t forget a place. For example, when I visited the coast last summer I photographed the sunrise to remember the colours and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: This answer conveys your idea but has grammar and clarity problems and is a bit repetitive. Use a clear topic sentence (I prefer both), correct grammar (‘both of it’ → ‘both’), avoid redundancy, and give one concise supporting point using a linking word. Replace vague phrases like “my dream was all to become a photographer before” with a concise reason.

Ejemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers different visual qualities. For example, urban areas give dramatic architecture and lights, whereas rural areas offer natural textures and peaceful compositions for my cinematic photos.

Sugerencia: The answer is relevant but wordy and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Open with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, because or also) and give one or two specific examples of places you want to visit. Remove repeated phrases and fix grammar (e.g., “a beautiful places” → “beautiful places”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views both in my country and abroad because there are many local sites I haven’t explored and foreign countries offer different styles of scenery. For instance, I’d like to visit Japan for its gardens and London for its historic cityscapes.

× I love taking pictures of different views because it is my way to create the kind of memory to not forget that place.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views because it is my way of creating memories so I will not forget a place.

The phrase 'my way to create' is not natural; after 'way' we normally use 'of' + gerund (verb + -ing) (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also 'the kind of memory to not forget that place' is awkward: use plural 'memories' and a clearer purpose clause 'so I will not forget a place.' This keeps consistent meaning and correct gerund use.'

× I prefer both of it as long as the view is beautiful and cinematic because I like taking cinematic photos or videos as my dream was all to become a photographer before.

✓ I prefer both of them as long as the view is beautiful and cinematic because I like taking cinematic photos and videos; my dream used to be to become a photographer.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'urban areas or rural areas' (plural) — use 'them' (Grammar Problem Type 12). 'Photos or videos' is acceptable but 'and' is clearer. The phrase 'my dream was all to become a photographer before' is ungrammatical: use 'my dream used to be to become a photographer' to express a past aspiration. Adjusted punctuation and conjunctions improve clarity.'

× I prefer both because in my country there are still places that I haven't visited yet and I know that there's a beautiful places that I haven't seen yet, and also in the other countries such as Japan and Australia, London and many more.

✓ I prefer both because in my country there are still places I haven't visited yet, and I know there are beautiful places I haven't seen; also in other countries such as Japan, Australia, London and many more.

Mixing 'there's' (there is) with plural 'places' is incorrect; use 'there are' for plural (Grammar Problem Type 12 and 1). The clause 'places that I haven't visited yet' can omit 'that' for natural speech. 'In the other countries' is awkward—use 'in other countries.' Punctuation is improved for readability.'