Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and direct with a clear topic sentence. Correct grammar errors and finish the final clause. Use one or two supporting details with a linking word. Also avoid redundancy (e.g., “views and different views”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different scenes. Although I'm not formally trained in composition, I try to experiment with different angles and perspectives to make my shots more interesting, for example by shooting from low or high positions.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or explain equal preference with coherent reasoning. Fix grammatical mistakes and use linking words (however, because) to connect ideas. Be specific about what you like in each setting.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views, but I tend to prefer rural landscapes because they feel peaceful and offer wide, open scenery. However, I also appreciate city views for their lively streets and architectural details.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then give two specific reasons. Avoid unfinished sentences and repetition. Use linking words (but, because, for example) and provide concrete examples of Brazil’s views.

Ejemplo: These days I prefer views in my own country, Brazil, because the scenery is very diverse. For example, we have dramatic coastlines, lush rainforests, and vibrant cityscapes, so I can find different types of scenery without traveling abroad.

× But I do try and vary my views and even perspective when.

✓ But I do try to vary my views and even my perspective sometimes.

The original sentence ends abruptly and uses 'try and' followed by a bare verb; 'try to' + verb is more standard. Also 'perspective' needs a determiner ('my') and a final adverb like 'sometimes' to complete the thought. Use 'try to vary' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think there's beauty in the city in the rural areas, Perhaps impartial to rural areas since it's a place I don't visit very often.

✓ I think there's beauty in the city and in rural areas. I'm perhaps more partial to rural areas since they're places I don't visit very often.

The original has several issues: 'in the city in the rural areas' needs conjunction and parallel structure; 'Perhaps impartial to' is incorrect word choice — likely 'more partial to' (preference). 'Rural areas' is plural so use plural pronouns ('they're') and 'places' fits better. Also punctuation and capitalization were wrong. These corrections address article and noun/pronoun agreement and word choice.

× If you ask me that question a few years ago, I would probably say other countries, but recently I'm beginning to appreciate Brazil more.

✓ If you had asked me that question a few years ago, I would probably have said other countries, but recently I've begun to appreciate Brazil more.

The conditional referring to a past time requires the past perfect in the if-clause ('had asked') and the conditional perfect in the result clause ('would have said'). 'Recently I'm beginning' is awkward with past reference; 'I've begun' (present perfect) correctly links recent change to the present.

× And it's not hard because we have many incredible views and they are varied.

✓ And it's not hard to appreciate Brazil because we have many incredible and varied views.

The original is grammatical but slightly awkward and repetitive. Reordering to 'many incredible and varied views' makes it more natural and concise. Also clarifying 'to appreciate Brazil' connects to the previous clause.

× We have country and we have.

✓ We have countryside and we have cities.

The original is incomplete and unclear. Replacing 'country' with 'countryside' and completing the contrast with 'cities' provides a clear, parallel structure that matches earlier mentions of urban and rural views.