Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verbs and articles, and avoid filler words like "like" and "peek" (wrong word). Use linking phrase to add one brief detail. Aim for 2–3 sentences and specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I travel to another country or visit a new café, I often take pictures of interesting streets or the interior to remember the atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and follow with specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases (e.g., "make my eyes"); instead describe feelings or effects. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use precise vocabulary (nature, greenery, peaceful, fresh air).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy being surrounded by nature. The greenery and open spaces relax me and the fresh air feels healthier than the busy city.

Sugerencia: Clarify your meaning and correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct statement (e.g., I prefer views in other countries) and explain why with 1–2 specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases like "paid first the bills" or "Izzy"; replace with clear ideas (routine, familiar scenery).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because the scenery feels new and different from what I see at home. Since my local area looks similar most of the time, traveling lets me discover different cultures and landscapes.

× Yes, sometime when we traveling to another place like another country, I usually like taking a peek like.

✓ Yes, sometimes when we travel to another place, like another country, I usually like taking a peek.

Error: 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'we traveling' lacks auxiliary and should be 'we travel' to match simple present. 'another place like another country' is redundant; simplify to 'another place, like another country'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for frequency and use base verb for plural subject in simple present (we travel).

× If I go to cafe, I will take a peek.

✓ If I go to a cafe, I will take a peek.

Error: missing article 'a' before countable singular noun 'cafe'. This is an article error (use of 'a'). The verb phrase 'will take' is fine in the first conditional. Suggestion: add the indefinite article 'a' to make the noun grammatically correct.

× I prefer rural areas because I like the nature of.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I like nature.

Error: unnecessary preposition 'of' after 'nature'. In English we usually say 'like nature' without 'the' or 'of' when speaking generally. Suggestion: remove 'the' and 'of' to make the noun uncountable and general.

× I like to see the green colors from the trees because the trees colors can make my eyes.

✓ I like to see the green colors of the trees because the colors are pleasant to my eyes.

Errors: 'the trees colors' has incorrect noun order and missing possessive or preposition; correct is 'the colors of the trees' or 'the tree colors'. Also 'can make my eyes' is incomplete and unnatural; you need an adjective phrase like 'pleasant to my eyes'. Suggestion: reorder nouns to 'colors of the trees' and use a descriptive phrase describing the effect on eyes.

× I think I paid first the bills from other countries cause in my country I see Izzy is everywhere is my country now so I want to see the others will form another countries.

✓ I think I should pay the bills for trips to other countries first, because in my country I see the same things everywhere now, so I want to see places in other countries.

Multiple errors: 'I paid first the bills' wrong tense and word order; 'should pay' or 'will pay' better depending on meaning. 'Bills from other countries' unclear; use 'bills for trips to other countries'. 'cause' is informal; use 'because'. 'I see Izzy is everywhere is my country now' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely means 'I see the same things everywhere in my country now'. 'so I want to see the others will form another countries' is incorrect grammar and meaning; correct to 'so I want to see places in other countries'. Suggestion: reorganize sentence into clear clauses, use appropriate modal or auxiliary, correct prepositions and pluralization ('countries').