Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and hesitations, and give one specific supporting detail with a brief explanation. Use linking words (for example/for instance) smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often take landscape photos when I travel, both within Thailand and abroad; for instance, last year in China I captured several mountain landscapes during sunrise, which highlighted the layers and colors of the peaks.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence, remove filler words (umm/uh), and expand one specific reason with a linking word. Use singular/plural correctly and vary vocabulary (countryside, natural scenery).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside offers more natural scenery. For example, there are many trees and open fields, so sunsets are unobstructed and often more colorful than in the city.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and explain one specific reason. Avoid unclear phrases ("many many years") and reduce hesitations. Mention a concrete plan or example with correct prepositions and word order.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new scenes and cultural variety. For example, I would like to visit Japan to photograph Mount Fuji, especially when clouds hover above the summit at sunrise, which would create a dramatic image.

× I always take some pictures of the view and landscape when I travel to another city in Thailand or even abroad.

✓ I always take pictures of views and landscapes when I travel to another city in Thailand or abroad.

The original sentence uses singular nouns 'the view and landscape' which is unnatural when speaking generally. Use plural 'views and landscapes' to indicate habitual actions. Also 'even abroad' is fine but 'or abroad' is more natural. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general habits and simplify phrases.

× For example, last year I went to China and I took pictures in the mountain views.

✓ For example, last year I went to China and I took pictures of the mountain views.

The verb phrase should be 'take pictures of' not 'take pictures in'. The noun phrase 'mountain views' is correct; keep past tense 'went' and 'took' consistent. Use 'of' to indicate the object photographed.

× I prefer the views from rural area Umm.

✓ I prefer the views from rural areas.

Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally and remove filler 'Umm'. Also 'from rural areas' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggest practicing removing fillers in speaking.

× This is because the view in rural area, uh, include a lot of nature.

✓ This is because the views in rural areas include a lot of nature.

There is an article and number issue: use plural 'views' and 'rural areas' for general statements, and ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'views' requires plural verb 'include'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× For example, there's a lot of trees and we can see the sunset clearly.

✓ For example, there are a lot of trees and we can see the sunset clearly.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular; with plural noun 'a lot of trees' use 'there are'. Use correct verb form to match plural subject.

× I prefer the view in another country for to be frank, because in the view in Thailand I see many many years.

✓ To be frank, I prefer the views in another country, because in Thailand I have seen the same views for many years.

Reorder for natural speech: 'To be frank' at the start. Use plural 'views' for general preference. Original 'for to be frank' is incorrect. The clause 'in the view in Thailand I see many many years' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I have seen the same views for many years' using present perfect to express an experience over time. Also remove repeated 'many'.

× But now so I would like to go to Japan and take some photo of the Fuji mountain with the cloud ahead above it.

✓ So now I would like to go to Japan and take some photos of Mount Fuji with clouds above it.

Multiple issues: place 'so now' correctly and remove redundant words. Use plural 'photos' for general intention. Use the standard name 'Mount Fuji' rather than 'the Fuji mountain'. Use 'clouds above it' rather than 'the cloud ahead above it' which is awkward. Ensure natural word order and noun forms.