Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Good answer: direct, relevant, and includes examples. To improve, make sentences more concise, avoid slight redundancy (e.g., "places I visited" and "when I travel" both imply travel), and add a linking word to connect the reason and the example. Also vary vocabulary a bit (e.g., use "capture" or "scenery"). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I like to capture different scenes when I travel because photos help me preserve memories and the mood of each place. For example, I often photograph sunsets and bustling local markets to remember the vivid colors and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Answer addresses the question but has grammar errors, repetition and informal phrasing. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, using linking words to add supporting details, correcting articles and plural forms (e.g., "rivers," "the scenery"), and removing repeated words. Provide one or two specific images or reasons to enrich the reply.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel more natural and relaxing. For example, I can see mountains, rivers and wide green fields, which create a peaceful and beautiful scenery.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and contains many errors and repetitions. Begin with a clear statement ("I prefer views in other countries"), avoid repetitions, correct grammar ("more green" → "greener"; compare properly: "more beautiful than those in my country"), and finish the thought instead of trailing off. Add a brief reason and a contrast with your country if relevant.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because the landscapes often feel greener and more varied than those at home. However, some places in my country are also beautiful, especially near the coast or in the national parks.

× I prefer rural areas because it's more natural and relaxing.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they're more natural and relaxing.

The subject 'rural areas' is plural so the pronoun and verb must agree in number. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' (singular). Use 'they're' (they are) to match the plural noun 'areas'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs/pronouns (they are -> they're).

× For example I can see mountains, river, green fields.

✓ For example, I can see mountains, rivers, and green fields.

This list mixes singular and plural nouns and lacks commas and the conjunction 'and'. 'River' should be plural to match 'mountains' and 'green fields'. Also include commas and 'and' for a correct list structure. Suggestion: use parallel plural forms and proper punctuation in lists.

× It's it's a good scenery to see, very beautiful.

✓ It's a beautiful scene to see.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun meaning 'landscape' and doesn't pair with 'a'. Repeating 'It's' is redundant. 'Very beautiful' is acceptable but 'a beautiful scene' is more natural and concise. Suggestion: use 'scene' for a singular countable sight or use 'the scenery is beautiful' for uncountable form.

× I prefer fuse in other countries because it's more natural, more more green and the scenery is very beautiful than my country.

✓ I prefer those in other countries because they're more natural, greener, and the scenery is much more beautiful than in my country.

Multiple issues: 'fuse' appears to be a typo for 'those' or 'views'; pronoun/reference must match ('those' referring to views). 'It's' is singular and doesn't agree with plural 'those' — use 'they're'. 'More more' is a duplication error; use comparative 'greener'. The comparative 'the scenery is very beautiful than my country' is incorrect structure; use 'much more beautiful than in my country'. Also include 'in' before 'my country' for correct comparison. Suggestion: ensure correct referent words, fix agreement, remove duplicated words, and use correct comparative constructions.

× However, it's almost the same if.

✓ However, they're almost the same.

The fragment 'if' is incomplete and should be removed. Also 'it's' is singular while referring to plural 'views' — use 'they're'. The corrected sentence conveys that views are similar without the unfinished conjunction. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure pronoun-antecedent agreement.