Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and pronouns, and limit to up to five sentences. Use linking words and provide specific examples (e.g., sunsets, rice fields, clouds) and one reason why you enjoy them. Avoid fragmented phrases and fill gaps with complete clauses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and rice fields because the light and colours are beautiful at dusk. I also enjoy capturing interesting cloud formations and rainbows, which add drama to my pictures. If I had a professional camera, I could capture more detail and improve the quality of my photos.

Sugerencia: Decide and state your preference clearly (urban or rural) in the topic sentence, then give 1–2 supporting reasons with linking words. Fix contradictions (you say 'open areas' then choose 'urban'); be specific about what features you like in that setting (e.g., architecture, street life, fields, horizons). Keep answers concise and grammatical.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of subjects like architecture, street scenes and colourful markets. For instance, I enjoy photographing old buildings and busy streets since they provide interesting patterns and people to capture. However, I sometimes visit rural areas for wide landscapes and peaceful skies.

Sugerencia: Good clear answer and reason. Improve by adding a brief supporting detail or example and a linking phrase. Use natural phrasing ('my own country' and 'right time') and fix small grammatical issues ('what I want to take' -> 'what I want to photograph'). Limit to up to five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer taking photos in my own country because I know the locations and the best times for light. For example, I know a hilltop near my city that has great views at sunrise, so I can plan to be there when the colours are best. Sometimes I travel abroad for different scenery, but I usually feel more confident shooting at home.

× Yes, when I am for small, I just love to take pictures different kind of scenes like sunsets and rice and the clouds in the sky and sometime big, small and I just love the rainbow.

✓ Yes, when I was small, I loved to take pictures of different kinds of scenes, like sunsets, rice fields, clouds in the sky, and sometimes rainbows.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb tense/choice ('am for small' should be 'was small' — past tense and correct expression), missing prepositions ('take pictures of'), incorrect plural forms ('different kind' -> 'different kinds'), noun choice ('rice' -> 'rice fields'), adverb and article use ('sometime big, small' is unclear; corrected to 'sometimes rainbows'), and inconsistent tense ('just love' changed to 'loved' to match past time). Suggestion: use 'when I was small' for past time, use 'take pictures of', pluralize countable nouns as needed, and list items with commas for clarity.

× I just hope that if I have the professional camera.

✓ I just hope that one day I will have a professional camera.

The original sentence is a fragment and mixes tense/modal forms incorrectly. 'I just hope that if I have the professional camera' is ungrammatical. Use a complete clause: 'I hope that one day I will have a professional camera.' Suggestion: use 'I hope that' followed by a complete future clause ('I will have') and remove unnecessary articles ('the' -> 'a' if not specific).

× So I took the picture from the.

✓ So I took the picture from there.

The sentence is incomplete and missing an object or location. 'From the.' is a fragment. If the speaker means a location, use 'from there' or specify the place. Suggestion: complete the prepositional phrase with a clear noun or adverb of place.

× Definitely open areas having a wide, wide range of taking pictures.

✓ Definitely open areas have a wide range of photo opportunities.

Wrong verb form and awkward wording: 'having a wide, wide range of taking pictures' should be 'have a wide range of photo opportunities' or 'are good for taking a wide range of pictures.' Suggestion: use appropriate nouns ('photo opportunities') and correct verb agreement ('areas have').

× Every area is so open, so we can take every kind of capture so easily.

✓ Every area is so open that we can capture many different scenes easily.

Awkward collocation: 'take every kind of capture' is unidiomatic. Use 'capture many different scenes' and replace redundant 'so' with 'so that' or 'that' to show result. Suggestion: use 'capture' with 'scenes' or 'photos' and restructure for clarity.

× So it is very easy to choose urban areas because in urban areas there's different kind of.

✓ So it is very easy to choose urban areas because in urban areas there are different kinds of scenes.

Problems: contraction 'there's' with plural noun is incorrect; 'different kind of' should be 'different kinds of'. Use 'there are' for plural. Suggestion: use 'there are different kinds of scenes' or 'there are many different subjects to photograph.'

× I prefer in my country because I know very well the areas and the cities, so it is easy for me to choose the right place and right time to take the picture what I want to take.

✓ I prefer my own country because I know the areas and cities well, so it is easy for me to choose the right place and time to take the pictures I want.

Preposition 'prefer in my country' is incorrect; use 'prefer my country' or 'prefer in my own country' -> better 'prefer my own country.' Word order and articles: 'know very well the areas' -> 'know the areas well.' Redundancy 'take the picture what I want to take' is ungrammatical; use 'take the pictures I want.' Suggestion: simplify phrases, place adverbs after the verb ('know... well'), and use relative clause 'pictures I want' rather than 'what I want to take.'