Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but has grammatical mistakes, redundancy, and slight incoherence. Reduce repetition (e.g., "I do like" + "it's one of my favorite hobbies" is fine but avoid extra phrases). Correct article use ("a unique" not "an unique") and sentence structure ("One of the most photographic pictures I have taken it was..." is incorrect). Keep responses within 3–4 sentences: state the direct answer, give a reason with a specific example, and finish. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures. It’s one of my favorite hobbies because photography gives me a fresh perspective on people and places. For example, my favorite photo was taken while traveling in Europe, where I captured a sunset over an old town square that showed local life and architecture.

Sugerencia: The main idea is clear (preference for rural views), but the response has grammatical errors, repetition, and informal phrasing. Avoid repeating phrases like "the rural area" and use correct verb forms ("you see", "they don't have much character"). Provide one specific supporting detail and use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") to make the answer logical. Keep it concise—3–4 sentences max.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they often show authentic local life and natural colors. For example, in the countryside I can photograph farmers working and wide, unspoiled landscapes, which tell more about the character of a place than planned urban streets.

Sugerencia: You express a clear preference for foreign views, but the answer is disorganized, repetitive, and contains several grammatical mistakes and informal filler phrases ("you know", "kind of"). Avoid starting with conjunctions like "But" and be specific: mention what kinds of landscapes you prefer abroad and give one concrete example. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "scenery", "architecture", "coastlines") and produce a polished 2–3 sentence response.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer more diverse and dramatic scenery than my hometown. For instance, when I visited Europe I enjoyed photographing historic coastlines and colorful village streets, which felt far more inspiring than the plain, modern blocks I see at home.

× I like taking pictures because it gives you an unique perspective about life and people and even the country.

✓ I like taking pictures because they give you a unique perspective on life, people, and even the country.

Original uses 'an unique' which is incorrect because 'unique' begins with a consonant sound and should take the article 'a'. Also 'it gives' mismatches plural 'pictures' so use 'they give'. Use 'perspective on' rather than 'perspective about' for natural collocation and join items with commas for clarity.

× One of the most photographic pictures I have taken it was when I was traveling around Europe.

✓ One of the most photographic pictures I have taken was when I was traveling around Europe.

Sentence contains an extra subject 'it' creating a redundant clause. Remove 'it' so the noun phrase 'One of the most photographic pictures I have taken' links directly to the verb 'was'. Also 'most photographic' is unusual but acceptable; consider 'most photogenic' as a better adjective.

× From my perspective, I would prefer the rural area and the rural area you get to capture the true color of this place.

✓ From my perspective, I would prefer rural areas because in rural areas you can capture the true colors of a place.

Original uses singular 'the rural area' when speaking generally; use plural 'rural areas' or a generic construction. 'You get to capture' is informal; 'you can capture' is clearer. 'True color' should be plural 'true colors' when referring to various characteristics.

× It helps you to learn more and it just makes you understand the character and the environment you seeing, unlike the urban areas which they're planned and they don't have a taste on them.

✓ It helps you learn more and makes you understand the character and the environment you see, unlike urban areas, which are planned and don't have much character.

Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps you'. 'You seeing' is ungrammatical; use the simple present 'you see'. 'Which they're planned' mixes relative clause and a subject pronoun; use 'which are planned'. 'Don't have a taste on them' is awkward—express as 'don't have much character' or 'don't have a distinctive quality'.

× But fortunately, I don't prefer views in my own country.

✓ Fortunately, I don't prefer views in my own country.

Leading 'But' is unnecessary and conflicts with 'fortunately'; remove 'But'. This fixes sentence flow; no quantifier error in content but original included an unnecessary conjunction.

× We don't have that much of A landscape.

✓ We don't have many landscapes like that.

Original 'that much of A landscape' is ungrammatical. For countable items use 'many landscapes' or say 'we don't have that kind of landscape' for singular. Also the capital 'A' is incorrect.

× And most of it is just, you know, boring buildings.

✓ Most of it is just, you know, boring buildings.

Beginning with 'And' is acceptable in speech but redundant in writing; remove leading 'And' for cleaner structure. Otherwise sentence is fine conversationally.

× Unlike when I went to Europe, the fresh, the fresh weather, the landscapes and everything were just phenomenal.

✓ When I went to Europe, the fresh weather, the landscapes, and everything were just phenomenal.

'Unlike when' is incorrect here; use 'When I went to Europe' to contrast. The repetition 'the fresh, the fresh weather' is redundant; use 'the fresh weather'. Ensure parallel list punctuation with commas.

× Unlike here. Here it's kind of.

✓ Here it's kind of different.

Original fragment 'Unlike here.' is incomplete; combine into a complete sentence. 'Here it's kind of' is a sentence fragment—add an adjective like 'different' or complete the thought to avoid fragmentary structure.