Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say you enjoy photographing scenes because they are beautiful and you want to preserve memories, then give a brief specific example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I find many places striking and I like to preserve the memory. For example, when I visited the seaside last year, I photographed the sunrise to remember the colours. Therefore, taking photos helps me capture moments I might forget.

Sugerencia: Clarify preference with correct wording and reduce redundancy. Use linking words to explain reasons and give a short specific contrast. Replace vague adjectives with precise descriptions.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside looks more natural and peaceful. For instance, fields and forests offer open spaces and quieter surroundings, whereas cities have many tall buildings and noise, which I find distracting.

Sugerencia: Fix grammatical errors and clarify meaning. Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a brief specific example. Avoid unclear phrases like "state dispute." Express emotional connection succinctly.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to the landscapes where I grew up. For example, the local mountains and rivers remind me of childhood walks, so I enjoy photographing them more than foreign locations.

× I like to taking pictures of different view because I think at every place is spectacular and beautiful so I want to capture the moment that I saw.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I think every place is spectacular and beautiful, so I want to capture the moments I see.

'Like' is followed by either the infinitive (to take) or the gerund (taking); 'to taking' is incorrect. 'View' should be plural when referring to different views. 'At every place' is unnatural; use 'every place'. 'The moment that I saw' mixes past with present preference—use present 'I see' or plural 'moments'. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× So I actually like taking pictures of all the different views.

✓ So I actually like taking pictures of all the different views.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and needs no change. It correctly uses the gerund 'taking' after 'like' and plural 'views'.

× I prefer the view in your area because I think the view in the countryside is more natural, perfect and spectacular and magnificent because urban area is too much building, tall building and is too noisy.

✓ I prefer the views in rural areas because I think the countryside is more natural, perfect, spectacular, and magnificent, while urban areas have too many buildings and are too noisy.

'Your area' is inappropriate here if the student means rural rather than the examiner's area; 'the view in the countryside' -> 'the countryside' is fine; use plural 'views' to match general statement. 'Too much building' should be 'too many buildings' because 'buildings' is countable. 'Tall building' should be plural 'tall buildings'. 'Urban area is too noisy' needs subject-verb agreement and plural 'urban areas...are'. Use 'while' to contrast clauses and add commas for clarity.

× I prefer the view in my own country because I think my own country is the perfect place that I born and I live.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I think my country is the perfect place where I was born and live.

Use plural 'views' for general preference. 'That I born' is incorrect: 'where I was born' is the correct relative clause. 'I live' can remain simple present; 'my own country' repeated is redundant so shorten to 'my country'.

× So I love the view and I a state dispute for a while, so I love it.

✓ So I love the views, and I feel a sense of pride about them, so I love my country.

'I a state dispute for a while' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is 'I feel a sense of pride for a while' or simply 'I feel proud of them'. Replace with clear, grammatical phrase 'I feel a sense of pride about them'. Ensure pronoun reference is clear and maintain present tense.