Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., capture, preserve) and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to capture and preserve memories, and then I share the best ones on social media so friends and family can see what I experienced.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence stating preference (or balanced view), correct grammar, and use linking words to contrast reasons. Be specific about what you like in each setting and avoid awkward phrasing.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views for different reasons. For instance, I like city lights at night for their energy and vibrant atmosphere; however, I also appreciate rural landscapes because they are peaceful and help me relax.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, add specific examples and use linking words to explain contrast. Avoid vague phrases like 'this world is too beautiful to skip'—instead explain why travel abroad appeals to you (e.g., new cultures, landscapes).

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because it has many stunning natural sites, such as mountains and beaches that attract tourists. However, I would also like to visit other countries to experience different landscapes and cultures, which would broaden my perspective.

× I love to share what I see and what I feel in social media, and I think taking pictures can, uh, collect our memories from that place, so I like it.

✓ I love sharing what I see and what I feel on social media, and I think taking pictures can capture our memories of a place, so I like it.

Use of verb + -ing: 'love to share' is acceptable but 'love sharing' sounds more natural; more importantly 'collect our memories from that place' is awkward: 'capture our memories of a place' uses correct verb and preposition. Also use 'on social media' (preposition fix). Suggestions: use 'sharing' after verbs expressing likes for a natural style and use 'capture' for preserving memories; use 'on' with 'social media' and 'of' with 'memories'. Grammar problem types involved: 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× I love both urban and rural because at night I often too driving around to see city light but sometimes I feel a city is too cold so I need a rural areas too to calm my mind.

✓ I love both urban and rural areas because at night I often drive around to see the city lights, but sometimes I feel a city is too cold, so I need rural areas too to calm my mind.

Multiple issues: 'often too driving' is incorrect word order and extra 'too'—use simple present 'often drive around'. 'city light' should be plural 'city lights'. 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun—use 'rural areas' or 'a rural area'. Preposition and article choices corrected. Suggestions: keep subject-verb order 'I often drive', match number for nouns and articles, and pluralize 'lights' when referring to multiple lights. Grammar problem types involved: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 6 (Present tense issue).

× I love my country. My country has a lot of natural views and many people come here to look for it.

✓ I love my country. My country has a lot of natural scenery and many people come here to see it.

'Natural views' is non-idiomatic; 'natural scenery' or 'natural sights' is better. 'come here to look for it' is incorrect collocation—use 'come here to see it'. Suggestions: choose collocations that native speakers use: 'scenery' or 'sights' and 'come to see' rather than 'look for'. Grammar problem types involved: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions/collocations) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) because word choice 'natural views' is awkward.