Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and an example. Avoid repetition (e.g., saying you love taking pictures twice) and minor grammar errors like "keep them as with me". Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because photos help me remember special moments with my family. For example, I often take landscape shots during family trips to capture the atmosphere and the people we were with.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Correct grammar ("prefer views in" not "to view in"), avoid redundancy ("a lot of different views" and "a lot of new valuable things"), and give a concrete example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer diverse natural scenery and traditional lifestyles that you rarely see in cities. For instance, I enjoy photographing terraced fields and local markets when I visit the countryside, as they tell stories about people’s daily lives.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence and one concise reason with a specific example. Avoid awkward phrasing ("captured all the viewed", "I will able"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to make the response coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer taking pictures in other countries because it allows me to document different cultures and places I haven’t seen before. For example, when I visited Japan I photographed temples and street scenes that were very different from anything in my home country, which made my travel album more interesting.

× Certainly I love taking pictures of different views as I love to keep them as with me as a memory.

✓ Certainly, I love taking pictures of different views because I like to keep them with me as memories.

The original uses 'as' awkwardly and 'as with me' is incorrect preposition use and word order. Replace 'as' with 'because' for reason, use 'keep them with me' (correct preposition and order), and 'memories' plural to match 'them'. Also add a comma after 'Certainly' for clarity.

× I love to click photos so that I can remember important events that I spent with my close ones.

✓ I love to take photos so that I can remember important events I spent with my close ones.

The phrase 'click photos' is nonstandard; native speakers say 'take photos'. Also 'that I spent with my close ones' is reduced by removing 'that' for natural relative clause. The tense is present and appropriate, so change the verb phrase to the correct collocation.

× So I prefer to view in rural areas because there are a lot of different views as compared to urban areas and there are a lot of new valuable things that can that I can learn.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are many different views compared to urban areas, and there are many valuable new things that I can learn.

'Prefer to view in rural areas' is awkward; use 'prefer rural areas' or 'prefer to view rural areas'. 'A lot of' repeated is informal; 'many' is better. 'As compared to' is wordy; use 'compared to'. The phrase had a duplicated 'that can that I can'; remove duplication. Word order 'new valuable things' is better as 'valuable new things' but 'many valuable new things' is most natural.

× So I prefer viewing other countries because I know about my country and I have captured all the viewed.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries because I know my own country and I have captured all the views there.

'Viewing other countries' is odd; use 'visiting'. 'Know about my country' is better as 'know my own country'. 'Captured all the viewed' is incorrect: 'viewed' is wrong form and missing object; use 'captured all the views there' or 'taken photos of all the views there'.

× So I will probably prefer other countries so that I can explore about different cultures as well as I will able to preserve all the memories of that country into my camera.

✓ I will probably prefer other countries so that I can explore different cultures and be able to preserve the memories of those countries on my camera.

Do not use 'explore about'; use 'explore different cultures'. 'As well as I will able' is ungrammatical: needs 'be able to'. 'Memories of that country into my camera' is incorrect preposition and number; use 'memories of those countries on my camera'. Also combine coordinating ideas with 'and' rather than 'as well as' in this construction.