Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and use more natural vocabulary and varied sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one brief specific detail (what kinds of views or why). Avoid repeating verbs (love, love) and informal words like 'snap'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes when I travel. For example, I often capture coastal sunsets and mountain panoramas because the colours and shapes look great in photos, and I share my favourite shots on Instagram.

Sugerencia: Open with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition (mentioning 'love' twice) and be careful with accuracy ('colder' is fine but explain why it's relevant).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the mountains and open countryside feel more peaceful. For instance, the fresh air and wide vistas help me relax and provide interesting photo subjects, such as layered ridgelines at sunrise.

Sugerencia: State your preference directly, then give specific, coherent reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, for instance) and correct grammar (avoid duplicate words and vague phrases like 'opportunities to other peoples to'). Also avoid overgeneralisation; be precise about what opportunities you mean (photography, exploration).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, our coastline, high mountains and traditional farms give me many options for photography and outdoor activities, so I can explore familiar places in different seasons.

× I love capturing different sceneries whenever I travel and I also love to take a snap and share it on my social media.

✓ I love capturing different scenery whenever I travel, and I also love to take snaps and share them on my social media.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use the singular form rather than 'sceneries'. 'A snap' is acceptable but when speaking generally 'snaps' (plural) fits better. Also, 'share it' is unclear because 'it' could refer to 'scenery' (uncountable); use 'them' to refer to 'snaps'. Use a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses.

× I prefer rural areas because seeing mountains is more relaxing and the climate is much colder than urban areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas because seeing mountains is more relaxing and the climate is much colder than in urban areas.

When comparing 'the climate' of rural areas with urban areas, include the preposition 'in' before 'urban areas' to indicate location. This sentence also implicitly compares climates; adding 'in' makes the comparison grammatically correct and clearer.

× And since I love taking pictures, I love views like mountains.

✓ Since I love taking pictures, I especially enjoy views of mountains.

Avoid repeating 'I love' twice in close succession; rephrasing improves flow. Use 'views of mountains' rather than 'views like mountains' for natural phrasing. 'Especially enjoy' shows preference clearly.

× Of course, I prefer views in my own country. In my country, especially in rural areas, there's a lot of beaches, huge mountains and of course farms.

✓ Of course, I prefer views in my own country. In my country, especially in rural areas, there are many beaches, huge mountains, and farms.

Use 'there are' for plural nouns (not 'there's' which is singular). Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' before countable plural nouns for more natural formal speech. Include commas in the list and remove 'of course' repetition for concision (kept one instance).

× It gives a lot of opportunities to to other peoples to.

✓ They provide many opportunities for other people.

The original sentence has several issues: repeated 'to', incorrect plural 'peoples' (use 'people' for plural or 'peoples' only when referring to distinct ethnic groups), mismatched subject ('It' is unclear) and awkward word order. Make the subject 'They' referring to the previously mentioned 'beaches, mountains, and farms' (plural) and use 'provide' to match. Use 'many opportunities for other people' for natural, grammatical phrasing.