Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Старайтесь давать более структурированный и краткий ответ: начните с чётного утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали и причину. Избегайте повторов («really good view», «this place») и грамматических ошибок (например, «it's make me» → «it makes me»). Используйте связку для логичности (например, because, so, therefore).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos of beautiful views to save the memory on my phone because I enjoy looking back at them later. For example, I photographed a seaside sunset last month and it still cheers me up when I see it.

Sugerencia: Сосредоточьтесь на одной-двух конкретных причин и выражайте их грамматически правильно. Уменьшите количество заполнителей («uh») и повторов (например, «building» несколько раз). Используйте связки (for example, because, especially) и точную лексику (architecture, design, skyline).

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy architecture and city skylines. For example, I like how different building shapes, colors and details combine to create an interesting scene, especially at sunset.

Sugerencia: Дайте чёткий ответ и объяснение с конкретными причинами; избегайте обобщений и грамматических ошибок (например, «other country» → «other countries», «I haven't seen» → «I have not seen»). Уточните примеры и исправьте название места («Basel» или «Brazil»?).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I want to discover places I have not seen yet. For instance, I would love to visit Basel in Switzerland to see its historic buildings and riverside views.

× Actually, yes, I really like to do photos of really good view because I want to memorize it in my phone to see this place or a good view again and it's make me feel good when I see this old place with a really good view.

✓ Actually, yes, I really like taking photos of really good views because I want to save them on my phone to see the place or a nice view again and it makes me feel good when I see this old place with a really good view.

The verb phrase 'like to do photos' is unnatural; English uses 'like taking photos' (verb + -ing) to express enjoyment of an activity. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Memorize it in my phone' is incorrect; use 'save them on my phone'. Also pluralize 'view' to 'views' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for activities, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct verbs for digital actions (save, store).

× I prefer views in urban areas because I really like architectures and this style of buildings is, uh, really have a good view because, uh, the construction of building, the color building, the shape of it, uh, makes me feel grateful.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I really like architecture, and this style of building really has a good appearance because the building's construction, color, and shape make me feel appreciative.

'Architectures' is incorrect; the uncountable noun is 'architecture'. 'This style of buildings is really have a good view' mixes structures: use 'this style of building really has' (third-person singular). 'Makes me feel grateful' is acceptable but 'appreciative' suits aesthetics. Suggestion: use uncountable nouns correctly, match subject and verb, and choose precise adjectives ('appearance', 'appreciative').

× I prefer views in other country because, uh, in my country I see all what I needed, all what I wanted, all beautiful places and other places in our world are, uh, I haven't seen and I think to really beautiful. I want to visit, uh, Basil.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in my country I have seen everything I need and want, and other places in the world I haven't seen seem really beautiful. I want to visit Basel.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' when speaking generally. Phrases like 'all what I needed' are incorrect; use 'everything I need' or 'everything I wanted'. 'Are, I haven't seen' is incorrect word order; say 'I haven't seen'. 'I think to really beautiful' should be 'seem really beautiful' or 'I think they are really beautiful'. 'Basil' is likely the city 'Basel' or 'Basil' (the herb); correct to 'Basel' if referring to the Swiss city. Suggestion: use 'other countries' for general comparison, use 'everything' with appropriate verb tense, and use 'seem' to express appearance.