Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., Yes or No), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and grammatical errors (use correct verb forms and articles).

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of views because I'm not skilled at photography and prefer to enjoy scenery with my eyes. For example, when I visit a beach or a mountain, I focus on relaxing rather than composing pictures.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, therefore). Use correct noun phrases and count/uncountable forms (many trees, lots of greenery). Reduce hesitations.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they have lots of trees and open spaces. For example, the green countryside with fields and forests makes me feel calm and relaxed after a busy week.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give specific, coherent reasons. Use linking words (because, also) and correct grammar (we have many natural places such as rivers and mountains; people are friendly). Avoid repetition and questions in statements.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many natural attractions like mountains, rivers and forests. Also, the local people are friendly, which makes trips more pleasant and memorable.

× Oh no, I'm not like taking picture of a different view because I'm not a person who good at taking a photo or instructing the view.

✓ Oh no, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I'm not good at taking photos or composing a shot.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'I'm not like' (should be 'I don't like') and singular/plural problems 'taking picture' -> 'taking pictures', 'a different view' -> 'different views'. Also ungrammatical clause 'a person who good at' needs 'a person who is good at' but better simplified to 'I'm not good at'. 'Instructing the view' is incorrect word choice; 'composing a shot' or 'framing a view' is appropriate. Suggestion: use correct negation with auxiliary verbs, ensure subject-verb 'be' present where needed, and use plural nouns for general activities.

× I just if uh, if I'm uh, when I just see the view is uh, enough for me.

✓ I just mean that when I see a view, that is enough for me.

Errors: ungrammatical filler fragments and missing main verb ('mean'). 'When I just see the view is enough for me' is a run-on without proper clause structure. Use 'when I see a view' and link with 'that is enough for me'. Suggestion: remove filler words, include the main verb, and use a clear relative or demonstrative pronoun to connect clauses.

× Or I'm like a rural area view because in a nature and it's have a many tree, many tree and, uh, many green, red, uh, this have a feeling and we can relax with a natural view.

✓ I prefer rural views because in nature there are many trees and lots of green and red colors; it feels peaceful and we can relax with a natural view.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'in a nature' should be 'in nature'. Missing 'there are' for existence ('it's have a many tree' -> 'there are many trees'). Article and quantifier errors 'a many tree' -> 'many trees' and awkward 'this have a feeling' -> 'it feels peaceful'. Suggestion: use 'there is/there are' to indicate existence, correct plural nouns, and choose appropriate adjectives for feelings (e.g., 'peaceful').

× I prefer viewing our own country because in our own country we have a mountain, uh, have a many nature of you like river, uh, many tree, uh, and are people still on our, uh, country?

✓ I prefer seeing views in our own country because we have mountains, rivers, many trees, and the people in our country are still very kind and friendly.

Errors: article and plural forms: 'a mountain' may be generalized -> 'mountains' and 'have a many nature of you like river' is ungrammatical. Use 'rivers' and 'many trees'. 'Are people still on our country?' is incorrect pronoun and word order; correct to 'the people in our country are'. Suggestion: list features in plural when speaking generally, place 'in our country' correctly, and use 'the people' for a specific group.

× Uh, they are very kind and friendly. So I'm like our country view.

✓ They are very kind and friendly, so I like the views in our country.

Errors: 'So I'm like our country view' is incorrect: 'I'm like' used wrongly; should be 'I like'. 'Our country view' should be 'the views in our country' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct verb 'like' for preference and a clear noun phrase to indicate what is liked (e.g., 'the views in our country').