Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce fillers (uh, umm), make sentences more concise and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'photos' not 'portals'). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details and a linking phrase. Aim for natural phrasing and varied vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I love photographing beautiful landscapes when I travel because photos help me remember special places and moments. For example, I often take sunset pictures at the beach and later share them with friends on social media.

Sugerencia: Eliminate fillers and finish sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence with a specific reason and one concrete example. Use linking words (for example, because, when) to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I prefer rural views because they feel peaceful and less crowded. For example, when I visit the countryside I enjoy quiet walks by lakesides, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Give a clear direct answer (both/own/other) and explain with specific reasons and examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views in both my own country and abroad because each offers different experiences. For instance, at home I appreciate familiar landscapes and cultural spots, whereas traveling abroad lets me discover new scenery and traditions.

× I love capturing, uh, beautiful sceneries whenever I travel, and taking photos helps me, umm, to remember, umm, uh, places and uh, the special moments.

✓ I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel, and taking photos helps me remember places and special moments.

The phrase 'capturing beautiful sceneries' uses the plural 'sceneries', which is uncountable in this sense; use 'scenery'. Also, 'helps me to remember' is correct but more natural as 'helps me remember' without 'to'. Remove filler words (uh, umm) for clarity. Use verb+ -ing 'capturing' correctly; the main correction is noun choice and simplification.

× And I really enjoy uh, sharing my portals on social media with friends.

✓ And I really enjoy sharing my photos on social media with friends.

The learner used 'portals' incorrectly; the correct noun is 'photos' or 'pictures'. This is a lexical choice error affecting adjective/noun usage. Remove filler 'uh' for fluency.

× Uh, to be honest, uh, I prefer views, uh, in rural areas, uh, because I think there, umm, a rural area has, uh, its own serenity And, uh, when I go outside urban areas, I always unwind and be.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas, because I think a rural area has its own serenity. When I go outside urban areas, I always unwind and relax.

Multiple issues: unnecessary filler words removed; sentence needed punctuation to separate clauses. 'I always unwind and be' is ungrammatical; use verbs that can follow 'and' — 'relax' fits. The subject-verb agreement 'a rural area has' is correct but punctuation and verb choice were wrong. This correction fixes sentence structure and verb usage.

× To be honest, I would like views, both of them.

✓ To be honest, I would like both kinds of views.

'Both of them' is vague and awkward when referring to two categories; 'both kinds of views' or 'both' is clearer. This fixes pronoun/reference usage.

× For me it's depends on mood.

✓ For me, it depends on my mood.

Remove contraction misuse: 'it's depends' is incorrect; use 'it depends'. Also add 'my' before 'mood' for clarity. This fixes quantifier/possessive usage and subject-verb agreement.

× So sometimes I would like to see the wheels in my own country and explore new destination in the whole country.

✓ So sometimes I like to see well-known places in my own country and explore new destinations across the country.

The original has wrong word 'wheels' and singular/plural mismatch 'destination' vs 'destinations'. Replace 'wheels' with 'well-known places' (or 'local attractions'), change 'would like to' to 'like to' for present preference, and use plural 'destinations' and clearer 'across the country' for natural phrasing.

× But sometimes I would like to explore.

✓ But sometimes I would like to explore other countries.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear; add the object 'other countries' to complete the idea and match the earlier question about domestic vs foreign views.